No Trespassing: From Scary stories at Americanfolklore.net

A Texas Scary Story
retold by S.E. Schlosser

     Peggy and her boyfriend Tommy were driving down a lonely stretch of highway at dusk when a thunderstorm came crashing down on them. Tommy slowed the car and they crept their way past a formidable abandoned house. Plastered all over the fences and trees were no trespassing signs.
A mile past the house, the car hydroplaned. Peggy screamed as the car slid off the road, plunging down into a gully. The car slammed into a large boulder, throwing Peggy violently into the door, before it came to a rest under a pecan tree. Her head banged against the window, and a stabbing pain shot through her shoulder and arm.
     Tommy turned to her. “Are you all right? You’re bleeding!”
     “Arm, shoulder. Feel bad,” Peggy managed to gasp.
     Tommy glanced cautiously at her right arm. “I think your arm is broken,” he said, and he tore a strip off his shirt and pressed it to the cut on her head.   “I’m going to call for help,” he said when it became obvious that the bleeding was not going to stop right away. But neither of them had their cell phones.
      “That house we just passed will have a phone I can use.” Tommy said.
     Peggy’s eyes popped wide open at this statement. Despite her pain, she remembered the creepy abandoned house. “Stay here. A . . . car . . . will come,”
      “I can’t stay, Peggy,” Tommy said, “It could take hours for another car to come, and you‘re losing too much blood.” He tore another strip of his shirt and placed it gently on the cut on her head. Then he went out and retrieved a couple of blankets from the trunk to cover her with. “I’ll be back as soon as I can.” He raced out into the storm, shutting the dented car door behind him.
     Peggy drifted in a kind of daze. Something at the back of her mind was making her uneasy. She slid down on to the floor and put her head on the seat, completely covering herself with the blankets, head and all. Feeling safer, she allowed the weariness caused by the wounds to take over and fell asleep.
     Peggy wasn’t sure what woke her. Had a beam of light shown briefly through the blanket? Did she hear someone curse outside? She strained eyes and ears, but heard nothing save the soft thudding of the rain, and no light shown through the blanket now. If Tommy had arrived with the rescue squad, there surely would be noise and light and many voices. But she heard nothing save the swish of the rain and an occasional thumping noise which she put down to the rubbing of the branches of the pecan tree in the wind. The sound should have been comforting, but it was not. Goosebumps crawled across her arms – even the broken one -- and she almost ceased breathing for some time as some deep part of her inner mind instructed her to freeze and not make a sound.
      She did not know how long fear kept her immobile. But suddenly the raw terror ceased, replaced by cold shivers of apprehension and a sick coil in her stomach that had nothing to do with her injuries. Something terrible had happened, she thought wearily, fear adding yet more fatigue to her already wounded body. Then she scolded herself for a ninny. It was just her sore head making her imagine things. Somewhat comforted by this thought, she dozed again, only vaguely aware of a new sound that had not been there before; a soft thud-thud sound as of something gently tapping the roof. Thud-thud. Pattering of the rain. Thud-thud. Silence. Sometimes she would almost waken and listen to it in a puzzled manner. Thud-thud. Patter of rain. Thud-thud. Had a branch dislodged from the tree?
     Peggy wasn’t sure how long she’d been unconscious when she was awakened by a bright light blazing through the window of the car and the sound of male voices exclaiming in horror. A door was wrenched open, and someone crawled inside. She lifted her head and looked up at a young state policeman.
     “Miss, are you all right?” he asked and then turned over his shoulder to call for help. Peggy told the officers her story and begged them to look for Tommy. They deftly avoided answering her and instead called the paramedics.
     As the paramedics carried her carefully up the slope of the incline, Peggy looked back at the car—and saw a grotesque figure hanging from a branch of the pecan tree.  For a moment, her brain couldn’t decipher what she was seeing in the bright lights of the police car parked at the side of the road. Then she heard a thud-thud sound as the foot of the figure scraped the top of the totaled car, and she started screaming over and over in horror. One of the police officers hastened to block her view and a paramedic fumbled for some valium to give her as her mind finally registered what she had seen. Tommy’s mangled, dead body was hanging from the pecan tree just above the car, and nailed to the center of his chest was a No Trespassing sign.

You can read more Texas ghost stories in Spooky Texas, by S.E. Schlosser.

Comments

thats so sad cuz he only did that to save his girl friend it way more sad than scary

Posted by: brittany | October 11, 2008 07:56 PM

i thought it was really scary

Posted by: michaela | October 20, 2008 03:46 AM

I thought it was very scary especially at the end when tommy had a tresspassing sign ion him. It gave me the creeps!!!!!

Posted by: Zoe | October 20, 2008 03:47 AM

hey this is a good story!! i didnt expect the end to be like that but really good.

Posted by: victoria | October 20, 2008 09:48 AM

omg aweseome story!!! real tight yo lol i love it it feraked me out just reading it!! <3 ♥

Posted by: sirena ibarra | October 20, 2008 12:37 PM

that was so not scary. and a really boring story

Posted by: bob | October 20, 2008 06:35 PM

i don't know i thought it was pretty obvouse whut was going to happen but it was still scary but your right britney it was sad in that sense

Posted by: kathryn | October 20, 2008 09:01 PM

that was not scary

Posted by: danny | October 20, 2008 09:42 PM

That Was crazy!

Posted by: Neec | October 21, 2008 12:20 PM

AWESOME story didn't expect a thing!!

Posted by: ayshia | October 21, 2008 01:28 PM

it was sad

Posted by: tynazia | October 21, 2008 03:03 PM

OMJ! That was scary, but at the same time sad. The part when Tommy had the NO TRESPASSING sign nailed to his chest was the scariest.

Posted by: Hannah | October 21, 2008 03:33 PM

this was so cool it was like i was there

Posted by: marissa | October 21, 2008 03:57 PM

thats a good one

Posted by: Melissa | October 21, 2008 04:56 PM

omg scarry

Posted by: Anonymous | October 21, 2008 07:31 PM

i think that was scary and i think that is sad. that is also nasty. i would do the same thing as her

Posted by: becca imler | October 22, 2008 11:09 AM

awww thats so sad but the wierd thing is if she had seen him then why did she not see somebody coming to put him up there. im freaked out too.

Posted by: kaleigh | October 22, 2008 11:10 AM

omg that was soo scary but it was not one of the scariest

Posted by: Anonymous | October 22, 2008 11:56 AM

i lake to learn this store

Posted by: mohamed | October 22, 2008 12:18 PM

that was a good story i liked it.

Posted by: kendra | October 22, 2008 12:46 PM

i really liked this story it was cool i wonder why that happened

Posted by: Ashlynn | October 22, 2008 12:53 PM

i really liked this story

i felt sad and scared. the sad part was when she was waiting for the boyfriend to return. and the scary part was when tommy had the sign nailed right through him on the chest.

Posted by: lucas shark | October 23, 2008 11:42 AM

this wasn't dat scary i could have lived with iiiiiiitttttttt

Posted by: ashley | October 23, 2008 12:59 PM

KOOL!!!!!!!!!
HTAT WAZ SOOOOOOO GROSSISH!!!!
i liked it

Posted by: ghh | October 23, 2008 01:00 PM

This story freaked me out!!! Its really good....do you have anymore???

Posted by: Emalie | October 23, 2008 04:52 PM

OMG!!! that is soooo good.....like i said before....plus, i live in texas.....so its really scary.....was that based on a true story???

Kudos for the author....
:)

Posted by: Emalie.....again | October 23, 2008 04:55 PM

wow now that is very scary
and i know how scary it is because i was in one just like that

Posted by: jay | October 24, 2008 06:06 AM

I didnt think that was going to happen omg that part with the NO TRESSPASSING SIGN on him creeped me out in some way awesome story. great job

Posted by: Missie | October 24, 2008 04:12 PM

this was a good story
i think the most creepyest part was when she saw her boyfriend hanging from the tree :|

Posted by: Anonymous | October 25, 2008 12:22 PM

THat was kinda creepy I heard it at a halloween party

Posted by: Jordan | October 25, 2008 07:42 PM

Oh, I just loved it! It was great Miss Sandy!!

Posted by: Coley | October 26, 2008 02:08 PM

That wss the freekiest thing I've ever heard I'm goin 2 recomend it to all my m8s I feel so bad about poor little Peggy I'll never tresspass again

Posted by: Bobbi-lee murray | October 27, 2008 08:46 AM

it wasnt even close to scary i need something to bring to school on holloween that will scare my classmates

Posted by: jymeika | October 27, 2008 06:30 PM

OMG!!! This story was amazing!!! I didn't expect that Tommy was going to die(jk)!

Posted by: Kaitlyn | October 27, 2008 08:03 PM

i love scary stories iat dis web site

Posted by: valerie cain | October 27, 2008 08:55 PM

aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh

Posted by: Anonymous | October 27, 2008 11:43 PM

Kind of a weird story with the Thud Thud on top of the car but when she was taken out of the car and saw that it was her boyfriend I felt sad for her.

Posted by: Dustin Gilbert | October 28, 2008 10:20 AM

it was scary all of you

Posted by: colby keating | October 28, 2008 12:11 PM

good story.it was gereat!

Posted by: Ashley | October 28, 2008 12:54 PM

omg that was soo sad! it wasnt very scary but that is soooo sad!!!!

Posted by: Silvia | October 28, 2008 07:40 PM

did not expect a thing sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo friken awsom later dueds love yall

Posted by: anna m bowen | October 29, 2008 05:51 PM

it was a mistireous story GOOD JOB

Posted by: Anonymous | October 29, 2008 07:24 PM

omg sweet, scary,sad iloved it

Posted by: samantha | October 29, 2008 08:25 PM

i love this story it is so good! i will tell it to all my friends! but i felt bad for the girl:( I also felt bad for tommy because he died just to help; his girlfriend.

Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2008 08:17 AM

Good Grief! That Was a great story, i actually thought the boyfriend was gonna make it. After doing such a good deed and all then getting killed by god only knows...Great Story!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2008 03:36 PM

wow that was freakin creepy

Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2008 04:44 PM

that was the scariest story i had ever read

Posted by: steven | October 30, 2008 08:44 PM

dats wats up that was a great story but i think it should be a little bit more scarier than it is sad

Posted by: KABRINA BROWN | October 31, 2008 09:42 AM

this story was really depressing i frlt like crying poor gurl seeing her boyfriend dying like that but oh well she only told him not to go

Posted by: Hanna Montana | October 31, 2008 01:27 PM

it was scary i didnt know that they were going to kill her boyfriend

Posted by: brittany | October 31, 2008 03:44 PM

0MG THAT WAS S000 SAD!!! ii DiiDNT THiiNK iiT WAS THAT SCARY...JUST V3RY V3RY SAD!!! =[

Posted by: Maddie! | November 1, 2008 04:51 PM

creepy.................

Posted by: shane | November 1, 2008 07:47 PM

omg i liked it but it would have been better if tommy would stayed alive.... now peggy doesnt have anyone to luv her:(

Posted by: brittany | November 3, 2008 12:42 PM

OMG THAT WAS REALLY CREEPY!! I GOT GOOSEBUMPS AFTER I READ IT! I FELT REALLY SORRY FOR THE GIR THO!!:(

Posted by: bob | November 3, 2008 02:04 PM

that was such a good story. its so detailed and vivid... i love it!!!

Posted by: jenn<3 | November 3, 2008 06:18 PM

OMG I FELT SO SORRY FOR THE HAPPY COUPLE AND MORE SORRY FOR TOMMY

Posted by: samantha buttney | November 3, 2008 09:07 PM

WOW AWSOME

Posted by: Anonymous | November 4, 2008 07:42 PM

that was pretty creepy hey?? allthough it wasnt one of the scariest. the scariest part was when he was hanging from the tree with the sign through his chest.
(so sad):(

Posted by: funkedelic | November 8, 2008 03:06 AM

SOOOOO SCARY!OMG! HOW SCARY AND WEIRD WAS THAT!

Posted by: sarah | November 8, 2008 04:41 PM

OMG!!!that was so scary espiecally the part when the NO TRESPASSING sign was nailed to her boyfriend's chest

Posted by: Ryan | November 9, 2008 09:37 AM

AWS0ME ST0RY:D LALALAL0VED iT(:

Posted by: IM JUST A GiRL KAY?:D | November 10, 2008 05:54 PM

screeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeem.That was so scary.I got an adrinilin rush in the mittle.

Posted by: sunnie | November 11, 2008 08:19 PM

wow...i was listening to winds of change by the scorpions, so i wasnt as scared as most of u were

Posted by: Omid | November 13, 2008 11:05 PM

That gave me the shivers

Posted by: Skye | November 16, 2008 07:53 PM

omg that was the best story ive heard in a long time i was amazed about how she did she any thing or hear him screaming or anything that should be made into a movie thats how good it is great job author make more and more stories to tell more people

Posted by: desitny | November 17, 2008 11:07 AM

omg poor tommy

Posted by: Anonymous | November 18, 2008 02:22 PM

i liked this story kinda. it wasn't scray-scary, but it was still good! i loved the ending it was the best!
you should make a video of this movie!!! lol

Posted by: cate | November 21, 2008 03:41 PM

I can't believe that happened!

Posted by: cindy | November 24, 2008 06:30 PM

man that wuz sad, not even scary..

Posted by: Monsoon | November 29, 2008 07:53 PM

that was sad

Posted by: secret | December 5, 2008 08:26 PM

this was sad & scary if i was tommy i would of stayed in the car with peggy and called the peramedics.

Posted by: mary brown | December 6, 2008 08:59 PM

it was scary 4 her not 4 me though cuz, i dont know why it wasnt that scary 4 me exactly

Posted by: Chrissyp7@gmail.com | December 10, 2008 03:48 PM

I thought the scariest part was when she saw Tommy's body hanging from the tree
with the sign in his chest. Tommy was so brave to try to find help for her. I also think that the girl was brave 2.

Posted by: Rebecca | December 14, 2008 10:04 AM

NOT SCARY AT ALL

Posted by: tania | December 15, 2008 06:47 PM

so not scary

Posted by: cyana | December 24, 2008 02:45 PM

that was an wonderfull story i like the last paragrah

Posted by: Anonymous | December 29, 2008 07:10 PM

i love the storie.......i got really creeped out on the part where he at the no trespassing sign nailed in chest....make more stories like that=)

Posted by: Anonymous | January 1, 2009 03:25 PM

So he was tring to save his girlfriend.How did Peggy's arm and shoulder got stabbed?

Posted by: Jasmine | January 3, 2009 02:34 AM

so is this what you get for being a good person how horrible!

Posted by: lauren | January 4, 2009 01:52 PM

dis story was scary and sad and BORING_____BORING

Posted by: Anonymous | January 5, 2009 09:43 PM

it like this story ..:D

Posted by: maryam | January 6, 2009 12:41 PM

good story ending was surprising

Posted by: kayla | January 8, 2009 08:50 PM

it was really well put together an akward ending but really good

Posted by: danny | January 11, 2009 08:00 PM

way sad. (sigh) poor Tommy. Wonder who killed him?

Posted by: Aleaa | January 14, 2009 02:25 AM

it waz creapiest thing that happpened to her and i didnt even see it coming oooooooooommmmmmmmggggggggg

Posted by: britney britney | January 20, 2009 05:35 PM

WHAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO:0 I WAS SO CREEPED OUT THAT I WAS GETTING GOOSBUMPS.AT THE END WAS SOOOOOOOOOO SCARY. BUT STILL IT WAS INCREDIBLE:)

Posted by: MARCELLA | January 26, 2009 02:52 PM

that was reallysad,was it the spirits or people that killed him yes or no'

Posted by: Anonymous | January 26, 2009 02:56 PM

That was awesome! it was cool at the end and i loved the part when peggy woke up to see her boyfriend hanging from a tree with the sighn on his chest. way scary.

Posted by: caleb | January 28, 2009 09:24 PM

That story was awesome. It had a sad ending, but it was awesome when she woke up to see her boyfriend hanging on a tree with a sign on chest. The only thing i didn't get was who the hek killed him?

Posted by: caleb | January 28, 2009 09:52 PM

that is so sad. something like that happened to my friend once.

Posted by: Elisabeth Marie | January 30, 2009 07:21 PM

WOW!!!! that was very very scary but they should of said who exalclty killed her boy friend and less time explaining the same thing about the girl!!!!!

Posted by: LiLy | January 30, 2009 10:38 PM

THAT....WAS...SO....not scary it was cheesy

Posted by: Danielle Aguirre | January 30, 2009 11:20 PM

Whoa, that was scary and sad.

Posted by: Ariel | February 3, 2009 02:52 PM

how scary

Posted by: Anonymous | February 4, 2009 10:56 AM

aww tht's kinda sad
but so KWL!!!!

Posted by: miranda | February 6, 2009 06:04 AM

that was a certain twist of an ending...i did not expect to read that...great job...i listed this as one of my favs....awesome..

Posted by: Mark | February 8, 2009 09:42 PM

that was not that scary!!!

Posted by: lola s. | February 27, 2009 07:22 PM

nice but not creepy

Posted by: kjgfs | March 4, 2009 06:50 PM

I'm gonna tell my friends to tell scary stories every friday and this will be one of them!

Posted by: Scary Story<3er | March 5, 2009 05:11 PM

omg thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat was sooooooooooooooooo scary i told the story 2 my lil bro and my bg brother scared him with a sighn tht said no trespasing on his chest he screeamed like a girl i got grounded so did my bg bro it was sad 2

Posted by: scarlett | March 16, 2009 05:43 PM

omg thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat was sooooooooooooooooo scaaaaaaaaaaaaaaryyyyy

Posted by: scarlett | March 16, 2009 05:44 PM

that was scary very SCARY

Posted by: Anonymous | March 19, 2009 08:25 AM

the tommy part was so scary because who hung tommy to the tree and nailed a no trespassing sign to his chest

Posted by: josh | March 21, 2009 05:08 PM

this story was so scary. after i read it i kept on hearing a thud to. scariest story ever!!!!!

Posted by: Roseda | March 26, 2009 11:37 AM

awesome story

Posted by: dyllon | March 26, 2009 12:40 PM

omg great story!!!! it went around today at school adn we made my bff scared cuz she thougght the edning was way CREEPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHA

Posted by: unknown person | March 26, 2009 02:24 PM

this is a really awsome story i love scary stories because i like feeling scared and plus that is creepy how the NO TRESPASSING sign was on his chest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: yessenia | March 29, 2009 03:15 PM

WOW that was a good story. Scary and sad. If you didn't like it then thats your fault but you know that you are just sayin it isnt scary for you to look good when you just sound ignorant. If you didn't like it then don't comment on it. Nobody asked if you liked it or not they ask if you liked it and would like to post a comment. people really make me sick!!!! like Bob,lola s.,Lily,Lauren,Cyana,and anonymous!!!

Posted by: Mellisa | March 31, 2009 11:42 AM

This story is soo sad and awsome u didnt think Tommy will die at the end

Posted by: Alex | April 3, 2009 10:58 AM

that was kanda scary. Iv, heard better

Posted by: ashley young | April 4, 2009 04:25 PM

That story was GREAT!!! It was sad and gross and scary all at the same time!!

Posted by: Emily | April 6, 2009 03:40 PM

soo scary aaaaaaah i found it sad at da end tommy was tryin 2 save his gf but coudnt..

Posted by: lucy | April 7, 2009 01:15 PM

NiCe... StOryyyyy..!!!!
m lUvIn,,, iT

Posted by: anchal singh | April 10, 2009 01:31 PM

ghost arn't real or any other super natral stuff retards

Posted by: Anonymous | April 21, 2009 03:37 PM

that is scary how did tommy get on da roof ?

Posted by: Anonymous | April 24, 2009 10:15 PM

creepy!

Posted by: emily | April 28, 2009 08:01 PM

This story needs to B mire scarier 4 me!

Posted by: Aaliyah | April 30, 2009 10:09 AM

AWW that is so sad all he did was try to save her

Posted by: Rachelle | May 13, 2009 08:12 AM

OMG!!!!!! that was SOOOOOOOO SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | May 15, 2009 07:24 PM

Omg this is so sad. I hope this is a made up story if not R.I.P Tommy

Posted by: Hannah | May 17, 2009 10:43 AM

IT WAS SCARY

Posted by: Anonymous | May 20, 2009 08:17 AM

OMG! It was like i was there!

Posted by: Matthew | May 26, 2009 11:26 AM

not very scary at all

Posted by: kj,dgc, yul,fyl | May 26, 2009 01:33 PM

awesummmmmmmmmmmmm butcouldabeen scarier

Posted by: shan boobaebii | May 28, 2009 09:07 AM

um im only ten and that was so not scary but its sad that tommy tried to save his girlfriend but still he was warned he shouldnt have went into the house!

Posted by: amy | May 30, 2009 08:46 PM

do u have a scarier one????

Posted by: Taylor | June 4, 2009 03:15 PM

WOW!!

That was creepy not soo much scary but creepy.

But then again its also really sad because she just wanted to save hes girl friend...

STIlL CREEPY THO!!

Posted by: Anonymous | June 6, 2009 03:58 PM

I probably would've done the same but hopefully i wud've made it instead

Posted by: Anonymous | June 13, 2009 05:27 PM

it was more sad then scary becuz they loved each other and it was a horror seeing him there just dead!

Posted by: Anonymous | June 17, 2009 06:59 PM

That story was awesome. For me scary and creepy, and it it kind of weird tommy on top of the car with a "NO TRESSPASSING" sign in his chest, and I wonder who did that and why he/she killed pegg too?

Posted by: Cynthia | June 18, 2009 05:57 PM

Wow, third one of these stories, like the one where in hawaii there was a couple and thier car needed oil and broke down, a roadio reported a serial killer is stalking the town they were in (which by the way was abandonned) and so she locked her doors and started hearing scrapping noises, police came by and said if she was looking for a boy and described her husband, she said yes and they asked her to come out but dont look up. she comes out looks up and there is her husband being hung with several knives stabbed into his body and his head skinned

Posted by: Gobbeer | June 29, 2009 11:33 AM

That was just a crazy weird. Although, I've heard it before. It was only a bit different. And It's for kids!

Posted by: Michaela Gorenflo | July 1, 2009 12:33 PM

that was just scary and sad cause i already knew what hat thud was

Posted by: tiffany | July 18, 2009 10:08 AM

lol

Posted by: story lover | July 19, 2009 05:01 PM

HI =)

Posted by: America | July 21, 2009 06:37 PM

wasnt scary but it was good and sad. i liked it

Posted by: marcus | July 22, 2009 12:42 AM

OMG!!!!!!!! thats so so so sad i cant belive it i want to cry!!!!!!!!!!! :(

Posted by: hannah | July 28, 2009 01:33 AM

I liked it.....unlike Mr.BOB!

Posted by: Jonathan Zavala | July 30, 2009 07:41 PM

that was scary it was good too lol i wwould recermade it to everyone it sooo good

Posted by: chynna | August 4, 2009 04:44 AM

Not bad kinda felt like i was there

Posted by: Justin | August 5, 2009 03:51 AM

that was lameeee

Posted by: Anonymous | August 9, 2009 08:45 PM

This was sad

Posted by: Emilee | August 10, 2009 01:07 PM

Whoa it totalty freak me out when tommy hang up that freak me out AAAAAAAAA

Posted by: Rianna | August 14, 2009 01:20 PM

dang no trespasing thats not right i owuld literaly hope out at that house crab an axe and cut the house down! lol and thats just me hahah

Posted by: kyle t | August 14, 2009 01:36 PM

I thought it was gonna be some creepy persone in the tree but it turned out to be Tommy! creepy!

Posted by: jake | August 14, 2009 01:41 PM

good and creepy!! but not scary!!!=O

Posted by: shan | August 17, 2009 09:01 PM

i thought it was sad :( it also made me thiNK of my weird friend named donald HE WAS WIRED

Posted by: bob | August 18, 2009 04:08 PM

That was disturbing

Posted by: Anonymous | August 20, 2009 10:35 AM

This wasn't even Scary. :|

Posted by: Anonymous | August 22, 2009 05:07 AM

i think it is more scary at night

Posted by: chloe | August 26, 2009 05:30 AM

it was really scary not that scary so i hate scary books

Posted by: vanessa | August 29, 2009 03:12 PM

it was sad cause i didn't expect tommy to die and peggy didn't even know it was him which makes it even more sad

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Posted by: Anonymous | September 4, 2009 03:30 PM

Excuse me. All things are difficult before they are easy.
I am from Jordan and too poorly know English, give true I wrote the following sentence: "jimmy mcnulty was glamorous for delivering the hooters declared under rawls' wiretap."

THX :p, Ithel.

Posted by: Ithel | September 6, 2009 03:50 PM

pretty good

Posted by: Destiny | September 14, 2009 05:29 PM

that was a good story but i am suprised she went to sleep with all the pain in her arm

Posted by: shelby feltner | September 21, 2009 12:12 PM

i though that was kinda creepy. It was really scary when there was the no trespassing sign in his chest.

Posted by: XxSpooky69xX | September 30, 2009 09:29 AM

I thought this was sad,freaky,disturbing, and weird in the day time yesterday, but oh BOY at night, this thing sounds so real and it gave me nightmares. weird!

Posted by: Audrey | October 7, 2009 04:38 PM

OMG i feel SO sorry for Tommy!

Posted by: jane | October 10, 2009 10:54 AM

OMG! I didn't expect the ending.

Posted by: Jacob | October 19, 2009 10:10 AM

dang dats messed up ummmmm he should of stayed there dats what he get j/p but i guess ummmmmmmmmm dat was scary she will be alrite wit out em ummmmmmm

Posted by: vannah | October 27, 2009 10:06 AM

that was a good story!

Posted by: ramsey nofire | October 27, 2009 10:31 AM

Sad, yet creepy...

Posted by: Jose | October 28, 2009 01:48 PM

it was ok... i liked iit, creepy enough but could have been better..

Posted by: Anonymous | October 28, 2009 03:05 PM

Hahaha it said my dogs name!

Posted by: Michelle | October 30, 2009 04:37 PM

awwwwwwwwww so sad!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 09:42 AM

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Posted by: enlissewexTet | July 9, 2010 01:59 AM

It's scary, okay!! But its the same story i had read early. Same tragic situation...

Posted by: jelly | July 12, 2010 08:13 PM

How did Peggy know to be still and quiet?? That's weird. Great story! I've heard some like that, but not with the twist at the end!

Posted by: Kacey | July 15, 2010 10:11 AM

THAT WAS SCARY!!!!!!!!!!!! :0

Posted by: sarah | July 17, 2010 05:35 PM

that stroy is more sad than scary

Posted by: october | July 19, 2010 01:22 PM

Who would nail a sighn to someones chest??????...Grose!!!!!!!!

Posted by: !ALEX! | July 23, 2010 03:45 PM

f ing scary man

Posted by: gary | July 27, 2010 01:22 PM

that was scary i knew what was it at the start of the thump on the car all of these stories end like that

Posted by: jeremy | July 29, 2010 06:52 PM

awsome!loved it

Posted by: df7jp | August 2, 2010 11:11 PM

it was very good the ending did not see that coming i liked it was scary and griping nice scary story

Posted by: jamie | August 8, 2010 09:23 PM

I was not scared at all but i was freaked out when she finally figured out what it was hitting the top of her car....great story to tell though

Posted by: Taylor | August 12, 2010 11:10 AM

It was so scary.

Posted by: Anonymous | August 14, 2010 05:33 PM

WHO THE HECK NAILED THE SIGN? SOOOOOOOOO CREEPY!!!!

Posted by: b-dawg | August 14, 2010 08:05 PM

what killed him?

Posted by: joanna | August 16, 2010 08:47 AM

that was awsome!!!!!

Posted by: jasmine 657 | August 20, 2010 07:37 PM

but how did the killer put tommy in the tree without any noise?

Posted by: daniel | August 24, 2010 10:55 PM

OMG!! that was strange, it was stupid how he died like that. I mean if i was her i would feel like Crap if he died for me! what happened in between then, i think someone should write another story in tommy's point of veiw.

Posted by: Noami S. | August 25, 2010 11:11 AM

Just a sad story with a lot of pain and violence, the only creepy moment was when the girl inside the car and and something terrible happening around.

Posted by: Holly | August 26, 2010 11:22 PM

I would say who ever lived in that house killed him. That was a good story.

Posted by: Barbara | August 28, 2010 10:36 PM

that was a really good one . tommy shouldve listened and stayed

Posted by: Britney | August 31, 2010 10:55 AM

LOL that was funny but sad

Posted by: Luke | September 7, 2010 05:09 PM

that was lame...i cud write a scarier story :P

Posted by: adonis | September 9, 2010 05:16 PM

vry scary storie
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Posted by: Hrithik | September 14, 2010 05:26 AM

thought this were well scary espically at the end, poor tommy!xx (:

Posted by: ellen | September 14, 2010 01:26 PM

it was ok i gussi need a more scary story see ya xxxooo :)

Posted by: TAYLOR | September 14, 2010 06:46 PM

not scary at all

Posted by: Anonymous | September 17, 2010 09:05 PM

that was awesome but very sad but wish there was more cuz who was in the house and who put him there so many questions unanswered

Posted by: laura | September 20, 2010 02:32 PM

oh ! thats good...............
i hope it has part 2 ..

Posted by: shaira mancilla | September 21, 2010 10:52 PM

that's so sad and scary! : (

Posted by: Taysia | September 22, 2010 04:09 PM

hahah it's so nice i love it either.....i really love it because of their value----cooperation...

Posted by: Aaron Alcuitas | September 25, 2010 02:22 AM

He just got butt powned a no trespassing sigh nailed. To his chest that's awesome

Posted by: Paul | September 25, 2010 10:53 PM

Couldn't of put it much better myself. Great!

Posted by: Lino Altiery | September 26, 2010 10:00 AM

this story is so sad because he cared about his girlfriend thats why he went for help but its an awsome story!!!!! :D

Posted by: yulissa | September 27, 2010 12:37 PM

That was awsome it gave me goosebumps but pretty sad

Posted by: bryan zaragoza | September 28, 2010 11:13 PM

the murder was done by a crazy caretaker

Posted by: maria | September 30, 2010 06:05 PM

these people took no trespassing too seriously. he just wanted to help his girl friend...

Posted by: casey | October 1, 2010 02:34 AM

The best

Posted by: Anonymous | October 2, 2010 06:58 PM

OMG that was so freaky imagine finding a boyfriends mangled in a tree... Disgusting! It was so sad i feel sorry for tommy!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 9, 2010 10:31 AM

the first time i read it, it was REALLY scary. then i started writing it down to read to my friends and it wasn't scary but i think it was the best story of all these

Posted by: julia | October 9, 2010 12:29 PM

Wow best story I've read so far

Posted by: Dan | October 11, 2010 09:59 PM

omfg dat was sort of scary but mostly sad i wanna cry i feel so sorry tommy went to get help just for her and instead he dies with a no tresspasing sign omg!!!!!!!!

Posted by: chapito | October 12, 2010 05:30 PM

i thought that a killer came inside instead of the officer XD

Posted by: Anonymous | October 12, 2010 05:56 PM

it was an awsome story so cool

Posted by: cooper kennedy | October 12, 2010 06:05 PM

perfect addition that totally endede the story perfectly how tommy died.....

Posted by: Anonymous | October 12, 2010 06:06 PM

THAT WAS SOOOO COOL AND Sad

Posted by: HAYHAY | October 12, 2010 09:30 PM

This story is lot like "Axe-Murder Hollow" except the ending is different and happier.

Posted by: Matt m | October 18, 2010 10:45 PM

this was brilliant thanks

Posted by: Nuclear Link Blaster | October 20, 2010 11:05 AM

Fantastic thanks

Posted by: Baby Bjorn Bibs | October 20, 2010 05:02 PM

i love the part when tommy foot was skraping on the car

Posted by: eddi | October 20, 2010 07:04 PM

Thankyou very much

Posted by: Air Conditioners | October 21, 2010 03:20 AM

i loved that story! it was sad though when tommy died):

Posted by: kiersten gaylord | October 21, 2010 09:34 AM

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Posted by: John101 | October 21, 2010 01:26 PM

That wuz ultra sad, I feel sorry 4 him. :,(

Posted by: mckensey | October 21, 2010 02:01 PM

Very good and sad. Especially when she saw him hanging from the tree.

Posted by: Christian | October 22, 2010 11:04 AM

What a nice post. I really love reading these types or articles. I can?t wait to see what others have to say.

Posted by: branchenverzeichnis | October 23, 2010 01:05 AM

that was freking awsome i loved it but it was really sad anda little scary

Posted by: katie | October 23, 2010 04:03 PM

lol thats good she put blanket over here :D

Posted by: Anonymous | October 25, 2010 04:20 AM

wow that was sooo scary im telling that one at my sleepover!!!!!

Posted by: liz | October 25, 2010 07:35 AM

I thought it was really scary.
Kinda sad what u gotta do to protect someone huh?

Posted by: derrick | October 25, 2010 05:23 PM

i dont really know what to say. Creepy.?

Posted by: sarah | October 25, 2010 06:36 PM

Hello everyone...looking forward to using this site!

Posted by: Amber Kelps | October 25, 2010 07:18 PM

That was weird! and kinda scary

Posted by: Anonymous | October 27, 2010 05:27 PM

What killed him?

Posted by: Anonymous | October 28, 2010 12:30 AM

The ending in a way is a bit ironic but also scary and gory

Posted by: omarr | October 28, 2010 05:57 AM

i really liked this story it was really creepy too lol but i loved it

Posted by: cera | October 28, 2010 09:22 AM

I luv this story, i'd like to see it in movie form

Posted by: Anonymous | October 28, 2010 11:42 AM

Posted by: John720 | October 30, 2010 02:52 AM

that's soooo sad :(
he did something to save his gf and he ends up dying and hung above the car? thats just sad :(

Posted by: mackenzie | October 30, 2010 06:11 PM

i luv the name tommy. scary story but also sad

Posted by: DeniseWazHere | October 30, 2010 09:15 PM

Very nice twist at the end.

Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2010 04:24 AM

I thought it was good and creepy. It is also sad since he was trying to help her.

Posted by: sheila | October 31, 2010 10:05 PM

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Posted by: viagra | November 1, 2010 06:47 AM

there's nothing lyk a gud story 2 make ma day.........

Posted by: yvole | November 1, 2010 08:48 AM

Well this actually scared me,

Posted by: Mariah | November 5, 2010 10:37 PM

it would of been scarier if the killer came back and killed her.

Posted by: Anonymous | November 6, 2010 08:05 PM

haha funny

Posted by: james | November 8, 2010 02:44 PM

it was funny

Posted by: raul | November 8, 2010 02:45 PM

Awwh. Thts soo sad. If tht happened to me, I would diee.

Posted by: Bri | November 8, 2010 09:47 PM

that was soo freakin' scary. if i ever see a NO TRESSPASSING sign, i will not go near it!

Posted by: scary bones | November 10, 2010 03:21 PM

I loved the story! It was amazing, and soo unexpected, but I didn't think it was scary. Anyways, it was still an awesome story!

Posted by: Anonymous | November 10, 2010 09:20 PM

nicee

Posted by: Anonymous | November 17, 2010 07:26 PM

THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER.

Posted by: raven | November 21, 2010 07:44 PM

what kind of twisted person kills someone who is trying to save his girlfriend! i mean, come on! that is too cruel!

Posted by: KittyKat | November 23, 2010 05:22 PM

that story will do nicely for my english homework :)

Posted by: Laura | December 8, 2010 02:58 PM

that was soooo sad at the end! i read a different version of this but it wans not as good as this one!

Posted by: anonymous | December 11, 2010 10:04 AM

:O that was not right, poor Tommy. I can't help but imagine him hanging there :*(

Posted by: Fearless | December 13, 2010 01:09 PM

Wow!!! Creepy!!!! I hated AND loved it!!

Posted by: Anonymous | December 18, 2010 02:03 PM

me likey

Posted by: nini | December 23, 2010 06:44 PM

i like it it just a littie bit scary

Posted by: Anonymous | December 25, 2010 05:41 PM

Scaary(:&&Sadd:(

Posted by: Brenda | December 25, 2010 08:32 PM

that was freaky!but i have heard a similer story before

Posted by: Autumn | December 31, 2010 05:08 PM

Wow! That was touching of Tommy. I wonder... Who nailed the No Trespassing sign on his chest?

Posted by: Anonymous | January 2, 2011 08:38 PM

Awesome I have heard something different but I so didn't imagine it would end like that

Posted by: Andrea Olmos | January 3, 2011 11:42 AM

wat was it that killed the guy a ghost?????? i need to know!!! :(

Posted by: Anonymous | January 3, 2011 08:10 PM

that was a very suspenseful story.

Posted by: Anonymous | January 4, 2011 03:58 PM

Oh that's so sad D=

Posted by: Caitlynn | January 6, 2011 05:20 PM

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my bff is going yell like a little girl thanks

Posted by: Nickole | January 7, 2011 07:55 AM

FREAKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

Posted by: Nice guy | January 9, 2011 12:46 PM

this made me cry

Posted by: Spunky | January 9, 2011 01:22 PM

Extremely well-written!

Posted by: Ignacia Carnett | January 11, 2011 08:44 AM

IT was sad but still liked it

Posted by: Ryan | January 11, 2011 08:40 PM

wierd but scary police should have listned to her and go looked for Tom

Posted by: Anonymous | January 13, 2011 05:59 PM

it was weird... not scary...

Posted by: Anonymous | January 17, 2011 10:14 PM

I LOVE IT ITS SOO SCARRY AND SAD AND AWESOME IT WAS COOL

Posted by: katie | January 23, 2011 04:04 AM

OMg so scary yet sad too he only did that for his girl :(

Posted by: Anonymous | January 26, 2011 07:18 PM

HAhAHAHAHAHA sucks for that guy! Good story!

Posted by: Codey | January 28, 2011 12:48 PM

sweet

Posted by: hannan | February 3, 2011 02:13 PM

woah...he did what was needed to save his girlfriend...if i was him, i would have done the same

Posted by: Christian | February 3, 2011 04:57 PM

Good story but not scary

Posted by: Lolface | February 5, 2011 09:06 PM

that was kind of sad you know :(

Posted by: Anonymous | February 7, 2011 02:48 PM

cool

Posted by: Anonymous | February 12, 2011 04:08 PM

ok so this was more sad than scary...i wanted to cry, poor Tommy! he was only being a good boyfriend...

Posted by: Bekah | February 15, 2011 09:47 PM

O.M.G
That is so scary....

Posted by: Teresa | February 18, 2011 03:16 AM

thats a lot like the ax murderer story ,quite scary!!

Posted by: Anonymous | February 23, 2011 11:02 PM

cool story

Posted by: i am awesoom | February 26, 2011 01:01 AM

ToT i feel like crying right now sooooooo sad and soooo scary but awesome!

Posted by: CHII | March 2, 2011 03:23 PM

at first a thought after the thuds someone would say "No tresspassing" or something.i didn't expect the ending.

Posted by: Awesome | March 3, 2011 10:36 PM

One word . . . Scary.

Posted by: Caitlin | March 3, 2011 11:30 PM

lol it is so scary

Posted by: Anonymous | March 5, 2011 03:11 PM

Omg!! That was sooo scry and sad!! D:

Posted by: memememe!! | March 8, 2011 02:33 PM

how about this story, a man is on a business trip and stumbles accross an old inn (as you do) he decides to go inside as he's feeling preety tired. Later on, during his 1st night at the inn he is woken by singing. He goes 2 investigate and finds that it's coming from room 47. He looks through the keyhole and spots a beautiful woman but he can only see the neck down, so he goes back to bed. The next night he is once again awaken by the same singing so he goes back to room 47 and looks through the keyhole again. This time all he sees is a bright red light covering up the whole keyhole so he goes back to bed again. The next day, he goes to the inn keeper and says "The singing was great last night wasnt it!" The inn keeper replies "no-one but you has stayed here in ten years! my daughter used to live here but she sadly commited suicide after being bullied because of her red eye"

Posted by: chelsea111 | March 10, 2011 12:56 PM

that was so scary and sad but the thought of having a dead body above my car ,during a thunder storm , alone ,in the dark is to much 2 bear:o !!!!

Posted by: grace r. | March 13, 2011 11:28 AM

K well I knew what was going to happen because I've already read tons of stories like this but it is a really suspenseful story. Although I wish they would have a second story that is in tommy's point of view. THAT would be scary.

Posted by: Hannah | March 13, 2011 11:57 AM

Well, someone takes their private property very seriously.

Posted by: Holland | March 13, 2011 03:39 PM

great sooooooooo scary

Posted by: Alex | March 15, 2011 08:08 PM

Hi me and my friend where having a sleepover and i read the story and we both agread that it was one of the scartest story we had read!

Posted by: Lilah | April 4, 2011 02:46 AM

AWESOME story!!!I feel sooo bad for the Tommyyy!!!

Posted by: Lily | April 6, 2011 03:19 PM

AWESOMELY SCARY!! :3

Posted by: darkangel | April 8, 2011 08:10 PM

thaaaaat was scary

Posted by: Anonymous | April 9, 2011 07:51 AM

thats what he gets for trespassing

just like in scary movies
you dont listen, you get killed

Posted by: janitza hades | April 10, 2011 08:52 PM

sooo scary!!

Posted by: six | April 11, 2011 11:54 PM

Omg that freaked me out so much, and i feel so sorry for tommy! he was just trying to save his girl friend. i wonder who killed him. it was a nice twist tho

Posted by: Bailey | April 22, 2011 10:06 AM

man now i'll think twice befor tresspassing cus i would hate for that to happon to me. "LOL"

Posted by: Jonathan | May 5, 2011 10:00 AM

love it or be cursed!!!! lol

Posted by: Elizabeth | May 9, 2011 01:48 PM

OMG!! this story was great, especially at the end that was really sad:( but loved it:D

Posted by: aylin | May 12, 2011 01:42 PM

Ok now for SURE i cant slee[ tonight....

Posted by: _wenny_ | May 18, 2011 10:49 PM

this made me get goosebumps thts really
creepy!!!! :0

Posted by: Anonymous | June 2, 2011 10:44 PM

weird

Posted by: Anonymous | June 6, 2011 06:03 AM

was trippy and freaky with a good ending i give this thumbs up

Posted by: Asimplereader | June 9, 2011 11:50 AM

awesome

Posted by: ROBERT | June 9, 2011 05:07 PM

That was really creepy... I really like the story because it was form the perspective of the girl, not the boy!

Posted by: none of your buisnes | June 12, 2011 02:04 PM

sad and super scary!

Posted by: jamie | June 17, 2011 01:23 PM

i love this story i read it all the time its one of my favs but its not scary its sad well it could be scary 2 new timers

Posted by: hello hello hello | June 18, 2011 01:33 PM

my heart pounded like crazy....and i loved it!!!!

Posted by: kayleigh | June 19, 2011 11:00 AM

OOOO!!! This story was so scary that I think I'm going to have good dreams!

Posted by: tia | June 20, 2011 08:29 PM

that was creepy i thought it wasnt gonna be scary because at first it wasnt but then i was creeped outit was such a good story i read it over an over i was shocked.

Posted by: liz | June 21, 2011 01:55 AM

tht was a good story but sad and scary

Posted by: laura | June 22, 2011 03:43 PM

aww thats sad!! and scary...

Posted by: ju | June 23, 2011 05:52 PM

i feel so bad 4 tommy he was only tryin 2 help his girlfriend

Posted by: Anonymous | June 29, 2011 04:17 PM

It goes without saying I will tell all my friends about it, really fresh. Cheers.

Posted by: Gunshop | July 10, 2011 07:41 AM

the bit where it says a no trespassing sign was nailed to him,i thought that was the best bit lool :)

Posted by: T | July 20, 2011 07:56 AM

I thought that it had been his ghost that went to go get help and he had died already