White Wolf
A Texas Scary Story
Retold by S.E. Schlosser
She snapped awake out of a deep sleep, screaming aloud in terror. In her nightmare, a large white wolf had been chasing her around and around the house, gaining on her with every step until it finally pounced on her and ripped out her throat. She lay shaking for hours, unable to sleep after such a terrifying dream. But morning finally arrived, and the day was completely normal. Celia forgot all about her dream, until the moment her parents reminded her that they would be going out that night to celebrate their anniversary. Celia turned milk-white. In her dream, the white wolf had come to kill her while her parents were out celebrating their anniversary! She started shaking and begging them not to go. Her parents were astonished at her behavior, and finally shamed her into staying home alone that night.
Fearfully, Celia locked herself into the house as soon as her parents left, checking every door and every window. She tried to laugh it off as she got into bed, and finally she shook off her irrational fear and fell asleep.
Celia snapped awake suddenly, every muscle tense. She heard the tinkling of falling glass from a broken window, and the snuffling sound of a snout pressed to the floor. It was the sound of a hunting wolf. A werewolf. Real wolves did not break into houses when there was plenty of game outside. She could hear the click-clicking of the creature’s claws on the wooden floor. The musky, foul smell of wet animal fur combined with the meaty breath of a carnivore, drifted into the room.
She could hear the werewolf’s panting right outside her bedroom. Then her body was out of bed and she sped through the bathroom and down the back stairs. She heard a soft growl and then the sound of animal feet pursuing her as she raced down the steps and tore open the back door. A glance at the window beside her showed a reflection of the werewolf leaping down the last few steps behind her.
Celia’s feet screamed in protest as she ran painfully across the sharp gravel driveway toward the tool shed with its shovels and baseball bats. Anything she could use as a weapon. But the huge, red-eyed wolf was suddenly between her and the toolshed, stalking toward her. The cold wind pierced her skin as she turned and fled around the side of the house. She gasped as the white wolf howled and took off after her. She could hear the terrifying sound of the creature’s pounding feet.
Faster, faster, she commanded her legs, panting desperately against the fear choking her. She would run around the house and back down the driveway, she thought with the clarity of sheer horror. She felt the wolf snap at her back leg and felt the sting of teeth. She put on speed.
The wolf veered away from her suddenly, and she felt a rush of hope. She couldn’t hear the wolf now, couldn’t see it in the cloud-darkened night. She kept running around the house, heading back toward the tool shed. To her intense relief, she heard the sound of a car coming down the road in front of her house. Her parents were back and would save her from the wolf!
Then her heart stopped in panic as she turned the last corner and saw the shape of the white wolf as it stood balanced on the porch railing right in front of her. It sprang upon Celia, huge teeth tearing into her flesh and ripping out her throat. She fell under the weight of its body, hot blood spilling all over the ground, and died seconds after she hit the ground. One minute later, her parent's car pulled into the driveway, its headlights blinding the white wolf as it pulled toward the house. Frightened, the wolf backed away from its kill and then ran away.
You can read more Texas ghost stories in Spooky Texas, by S.E. Schlosser.




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This is a crazy story. To me,the ending was really surprising. I could picture all this happening.
Posted by: Katharine | October 13, 2008 05:12 PM
It was a cool story
Posted by: Jonjon | October 14, 2008 08:51 PM
omg it was scary but i think they could of added a little more detail to it
to make it cooler nd scaryer !
Posted by: Carlie | October 15, 2008 02:38 PM
It was a pretty good story. Made my hairs stand up!
Posted by: Joe | October 16, 2008 09:08 AM
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Posted by: Jenny | October 16, 2008 02:43 PM
boo hoo
Posted by: Anonymous | October 17, 2008 09:49 AM
the story was k but to tell u the truth i think the ending was sucky! HOW COULD U GET CONFUSED WITH CAR LIGHTS WITH A WOLFS TEETH THERE NOT EVEN TAT SHINY! but i admit it was ok but next time do a little bit something more believable lol.......>but i liked the beginning though so keep it up! xoxoxox =)
Posted by: Sophia | October 17, 2008 10:11 AM
It was a good story but i think it could of been better than that..but other than that it was a good story
Posted by: Alfred | October 17, 2008 12:43 PM
The ending wasn't very clear. Was the werewolf one of her parents?
Posted by: Dana | October 17, 2008 01:13 PM
The story was cool. This was probably the girl dreaming again.
Posted by: Steve Hodges | October 17, 2008 01:28 PM
this is sooooooo totally cool but it would be better with a better ending like did her parents find her when they came home from their little date.
Posted by: amanda hanson | October 17, 2008 07:07 PM
do you mind if i use it in refraze for a scary story contest
Posted by: amanda hanson | October 17, 2008 07:09 PM
this story is wack
Posted by: stephanie | October 17, 2008 08:54 PM
it was really terrifying
Posted by: Anonymous | October 18, 2008 02:14 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! i loved this story you should make so scary ones i love scary stories
Posted by: katrina | October 18, 2008 02:21 AM
if that is true then its a cool storie
Posted by: Shauni | October 18, 2008 03:19 AM
boring!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: shauni | October 18, 2008 03:23 AM
It was a good story! And quite scary, too! But I wish it had a clearer ending.
Posted by: Diana | October 18, 2008 04:47 AM
There is a longer, much more detailed version of this story in Spooky Texas. This is just the short version.
Posted by: S.E. Schlosser | October 18, 2008 10:19 AM
THIS STORY WAS COOOOOOOOOL THATS BEACAUSE I LOVE SCARY STORY BUT ANYWAY THE ENDING BIT WAS NOT GOOD
Posted by: Aisha.m | October 19, 2008 06:43 AM
this story was a alsome storie you should put more like this or make another one talking about the samething
Posted by: angela .m. serrano | October 23, 2008 06:19 AM
this is so bbbbooooorrrrriiiinnnngggg!!!!!!!!
Posted by: cynthia | October 23, 2008 04:28 PM
THIS WAS THE BEST SCARY STORY EVER.YOU REALLY NEED TOPUT THESE INTO A NEWS PAPPER OR A MOVIE WEBSITE. ANYWAY IT WAS A VERY SCARY STORY I FREAKED MY KIDSOUT WITH THE STORY. IT WAS PRETTY FUNNY TO ME.
Posted by: MARY | October 24, 2008 09:37 AM
i liked it exept the ending i think it was kinda wierd to mistake a headlight from a car from a white wolves tooth???? but i thinkit was awesome!!!!
Posted by: anonamas | October 26, 2008 02:04 PM
this was an ok story not to scary though
Posted by: Brittany Mays | October 27, 2008 09:23 AM
I missed the part about the toothless vampire.
Posted by: Anonymous | October 27, 2008 10:39 AM
The toothless vampire had no bite. The werewolf should have eaten at Chick Fil A
Posted by: Harry Leg | October 27, 2008 10:40 AM
omg it was awsome i loved it but a little more detail
Posted by: domenic | October 27, 2008 03:01 PM
Most of these people need to read the story a little more thoroughly before they leave comments. The girl didn't mistake the wolve's teeth for car headlights...the car actually WAS coming up the driveway, it just happened to illuminate the werewolf that she couldn't see anymore. It was a very good story.
Posted by: Tissa | October 28, 2008 01:09 AM
totally kooleo!!! lol it isnt that scary tho yo. lol gotz 2 goz lov ya buh bi
Posted by: yo | October 28, 2008 07:33 PM
OMG k the story was a good one but wear did they get the idea of the were-wolf coming out of "no-where" and suddenly being there in front of her... weird but good...needs more detail-
Raven
Posted by: raven | October 28, 2008 11:07 PM
wierd story good but the ending was a bit confusing.... xoxox
Posted by: steve | October 29, 2008 09:44 AM
this story was really good ecept the End that was pretty boring ~but it is really made me want to finsh the stroy !♥
Posted by: kota | October 29, 2008 12:41 PM
what was suposse to be scary about it?
Posted by: Hinata | October 30, 2008 10:33 AM
oh my god that is the scariest story ever!
Posted by: nicole | October 30, 2008 12:08 PM
cool
Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2008 04:35 PM
that was so crazy i really likeed it, was so scary aaaaahhhhhh bad dreams hay
Posted by: max smith | November 2, 2008 09:09 PM
it was an awesome story. i loved the beggining.it was like i woke from a deep nightmare
Posted by: claudia | November 4, 2008 08:49 PM
it was awesome! i was surprised that her dream came true!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: ally | November 11, 2008 06:05 PM
I thought it was a good story but it really could've had a better ending. And it couldhave been a little more scary.
Posted by: Hanna | November 11, 2008 07:06 PM
this story is so WAHHHH... it makes my hair straight...hehehe...
Posted by: dezza | November 18, 2008 04:43 AM
i like the story.i mean it really freaked me out.i even shouted out as i was reading it.
Posted by: Anonymous | November 24, 2008 09:04 PM
this was scary. i had a dream one time that these red eyes (that had no pupils) stare at me. i wasn't afraid. then when i went to bed that night, i had the same dreams about the red eyes. it was freaky!
Posted by: Katie | December 4, 2008 05:28 PM
IT WAS COOL BUT THE ENDING WAS BORING AND DETAILS BECAUSE I'M AN EXPERT
Posted by: TUNIA | December 6, 2008 02:01 PM
this story freaked me out after i read this my white siberian husky puppy looks like the white wolf described and she scared me half to death when she came in from the garden because she had been fighting with our other puppy a german shepherd mix and she had blood all over her. i nearly wet myself from screaming !!!!!:-)
Posted by: Kelbie | December 12, 2008 04:25 AM
that was a strange story
Posted by: Rebecca | December 14, 2008 10:17 AM
Why did the white wolf kill her for what? That story was scary.
Posted by: Jasmine | January 3, 2009 02:45 AM
i didnt find this very scary, just kinda tense. wondering what would happen. i would have climbed onto my roof. the wolf no way wouldv been able 2 fit through my window!
Posted by: lauren | January 4, 2009 01:21 PM
ok story but needed more detail and ending kinda sucked cuz it didnt say anything past the girl dieing =( i was so disapointed!
Posted by: kayla | January 8, 2009 08:20 PM
that was not that freaky but just the part when the white wolf ripped out her throat and she died
Posted by: bubu | February 7, 2009 12:22 PM
I did not find that scary until the part when the wolf ripped out the throat and then she died.
Posted by: jack | February 7, 2009 12:27 PM
Wow Celia is so lucky. She has the motive to even move when she knows something is outside her door. I would of just grabbed my cellphone and waited and maybe would've gotten killed. o.o
Posted by: Jason | February 9, 2009 01:51 AM
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Posted by: design graphic online degree your | February 14, 2009 11:06 AM
This is the greatest storie i have heard here besides the "No Tresspassing" storie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: Yazmine | February 21, 2009 11:52 PM
this story was freaky and awesome.
Posted by: Anonymous | February 22, 2009 06:23 PM
this story is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: amanda | February 23, 2009 03:37 PM
ill tell this one at my next sleep over!!
Posted by: Ashleyn | March 8, 2009 01:56 PM
Was good, however the ending could have more details.
Posted by: Naya | March 9, 2009 08:27 PM
Wow......You should be a horror writer-a little more detail and that could be a winner!!!
Posted by: Belle | March 9, 2009 10:54 PM
Borring
Posted by: Jackie Loza | March 21, 2009 01:52 PM
i agree that no trepassing is the best
Posted by: dyllon | March 26, 2009 12:54 PM
this was an okay story but the ending was wierd...... it was good though.
Posted by: isaiah | April 7, 2009 12:34 PM
this was such a scary story i my eyes got watery and i was scared then again the watery eyes probably relate to the allergies
Posted by: gina | April 28, 2009 07:44 PM
(speechless)
Posted by: emily | April 28, 2009 08:05 PM
too predictible
Posted by: Andrew | May 10, 2009 04:10 PM
I AM A KID ONLY 11 IT SCARED ME HALF TO DEATH IM GOING TO SCREAM MY HEAD OFF IM SCARED TO GO IN ROOMS AND I STAY WITH MY PARENTS AND ADOLTS
Posted by: olivia | May 10, 2009 04:18 PM
omf. thiss story scared mee ;P
Posted by: michaelasartoris ; | May 26, 2009 08:01 PM
THIS WAS AN AWSOME STORY.........BUUTT IT COULD BE SCARIER
Posted by: Elektra deea | May 28, 2009 03:04 PM
its ok! not really scary!
i like it to be cant go to bed scary!
Posted by: Boo | May 28, 2009 05:42 PM
it was ok
it was kinda obvious that was going to happen
Posted by: Cynthia | June 18, 2009 06:54 PM
omg! i am watching my back at night though im still scared of the wolf off of lady in the water. now i think there going to gain up on me!AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
HELP ME!
Posted by: sara | July 8, 2009 04:13 PM
Are you People CRAZY !!!! this is really detailed i bet yall couldnt even write a story thiS good
Posted by: cheyenne | July 8, 2009 08:24 PM
creeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepy
Posted by: Tyler | July 13, 2009 08:37 AM
weird
Posted by: Taw | July 13, 2009 09:25 AM
This was a good story
Posted by: Anonymous | July 14, 2009 08:44 PM
whats wrong with u people its not scary at all, umless ur babyies
Posted by: shahida | July 15, 2009 11:32 PM
OMG IT WAS ONE OF THE FREAKEST SCARY STORIES I HAVE EVER HEARD
Posted by: Nataline | July 23, 2009 10:54 AM
it was 2 predictable
Posted by: Jonathan | July 30, 2009 07:48 PM
This wasn't scary, but it was pretty good. Just make it more beliveable and put more details in it to make it better :D
Posted by: blah | July 31, 2009 04:20 AM
yea this was the most rere story ever
Posted by: ARIELLE=) | August 24, 2009 01:41 PM
OMG. I hate the ' rip out throat' part. Hey guys i'm only 10! I'm hugging my bear for now..........
Posted by: OMG | August 30, 2009 11:35 PM
hm.. strange :)
Posted by: Xxx Drunk Girls | September 15, 2009 10:48 PM
coolo!
Posted by: Anonymous | October 21, 2009 01:24 PM
it was strange cuz the ending
Posted by: random guy | October 22, 2009 11:44 AM
diz storry was so lame ive read better in child books it was funy
Posted by: skittles | October 22, 2009 11:45 AM
II TToughTT TThiSS SStorYY WWaSS CCooLL
Posted by: Anonymous | October 27, 2009 09:47 AM
it was very shocking in a bloody way i can see it now but anime !!WOW!!
Posted by: james biggers | October 27, 2009 11:29 AM
everyone who said it was boring are the ones who are bording
Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 01:39 AM
this story was sad
Posted by: midnight | November 8, 2009 04:53 PM
IT WAS COOLISH
Posted by: Anonymous | December 28, 2009 05:21 PM
How did you did the book
Posted by: Anonymous | January 7, 2010 05:19 PM
I wondered if you could set up some system where when your publish a new article, i get emailed to alert me?
Posted by: Naruto Shippuden | January 7, 2010 11:30 PM
this is sick im copying it out to share with my friends at ingestre hall im gonna scare the crap out of them
Posted by: ellie | January 22, 2010 01:53 PM
now this girl must have been a phsyc
Posted by: shelly | January 30, 2010 12:48 PM
Loved IT!
Posted by: saul | February 2, 2010 07:29 PM
crap
Posted by: Anonymous | February 5, 2010 04:06 PM
"spine tingling suspense" as I imagined the wolf getting closer and closer to it's prey! Keep it up!
Posted by: Tim | February 17, 2010 04:49 PM
i need a little more things in it but it was a good crazy storie
Posted by: mlaine | February 26, 2010 05:25 PM
what the $%#* !
Posted by: alyssa | March 23, 2010 10:32 PM
im obsessed w/ wolves and this story is good but i think it would had been a little better if the wolf gave pitty on the girl and either dragged her of to his pack or just tortured her alittle then left her alone.but i think its one of those stories that just has a blunt ending =/ it ends a little to quickly ...
Posted by: Rubywolf | March 29, 2010 03:48 PM
Did the parents have to come home 1 minute after she died!now i am scared to go to sleep!
Posted by: Anonymous | March 30, 2010 12:42 PM
one word for this would have to be AWESOME!! loved it favorite part is when her throat gets ripped out! HA HA HA!
Posted by: Anonymous | March 30, 2010 06:41 PM
omg i live in texas and i had that same dream i got scared...
Posted by: Anonymous | March 30, 2010 07:36 PM
SCARY STORY!!!
Posted by: Roli | April 4, 2010 07:24 PM
that is gonna give me nitemares now.that is f***ing scary !
Posted by: mc hammer | April 6, 2010 11:16 AM
this story was wayyy too predictable, what is wrong with youu people, i got soooo scared from all the others, and this was scaryy but, its just basicly, she has a dream, and it comes true, no complications, nothing different, doesn't fight it off, nothing. Big lead up to nothing. Alot could've been done with this story, and the ending was really dissapointing!!
Posted by: anonymous | April 9, 2010 01:24 AM
boooooo
Posted by: Anonymous | May 6, 2010 09:06 PM
wuts up with the end?:S
Posted by: sarah | May 10, 2010 03:43 AM
need better stories! i love scary stories and movies and that is not scary
Posted by: elizabeth | May 17, 2010 03:27 PM
i KINDA FIGURED THAT WAS GONNA HAPPEN!!!O.o
Posted by: Anonymous | June 23, 2010 11:50 AM
wow that wz a good story, but the ending coulda been better. other than that it wz really good. but who wz the werewolf? & wat did the parents do wen they saw the girl? but seriously, it wz pretty freaky.
Posted by: sportychic | July 1, 2010 01:35 PM
I THINK IT WAS A BORING
STORY I WAS NOT EVEN
SCARED.
Posted by: Ankush | July 17, 2010 09:37 AM
EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Posted by: Alyy | August 13, 2010 04:05 PM
I don't get it, was it real or a dream? And if she heard the car pull up, why did the parents come 1 minute later? Wouldn't they have been home by then? It was confusing! Oh by the way, I liked this story! :)
Posted by: BieberFan | August 14, 2010 07:21 PM
kereepy
Posted by: Anonymous | August 16, 2010 06:08 PM
i love it
Posted by: bieber lover | August 21, 2010 04:41 PM
it was a pointless story
Posted by: anonymous | August 23, 2010 09:57 AM
this was a kick a*% story rly well written we both love wolves and we read it during a thunder storm in a closet with total darkness
Posted by: lunatrix & bellatrix | August 29, 2010 08:04 PM
I love this story it's my favorite!
Posted by: Hannah | September 2, 2010 10:03 PM
The head lights blinded the WOLF not the girl
"One minute later, her parent's car pulled into the driveway, its headlights blinding the white wolf as it pulled toward the house"
.....other than some of the comments this was an awesome story :D
Posted by: Onyx | September 7, 2010 09:00 PM
Wow, this was good! You should have added a bid more detail to what everything looked like though, would have made it scarier!
Posted by: Abbey | September 15, 2010 11:39 PM
it was good and a bit scary but I didn't really get the ending. did the girl die or not?
Posted by: Tanya Kosar | September 16, 2010 08:57 AM
WOW!!!!!! This sctory scurred the heck outta me! ill be watching my back from now on!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: Jordan Morgan | September 16, 2010 01:52 PM
i liked it
Posted by: likster | September 23, 2010 02:48 PM
OMG!! When I was reading this story my dog started barking on I flipped out!!
Posted by: Madi | September 23, 2010 02:54 PM
awesome story! made me scared, lol
Posted by: Stephanie | September 27, 2010 10:29 AM
so freakin awsome. :)
Posted by: Anonymous | September 29, 2010 12:50 PM
It was soooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. I can picture it happening.
Posted by: Amanda | September 29, 2010 05:37 PM
It was soooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. I can picture it happening.
Posted by: Amanda | September 29, 2010 05:37 PM
good story
Posted by: Richard Twitty | October 1, 2010 07:18 PM
it was a tight and sweet storie loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: thomas | October 2, 2010 07:57 PM
Amazed and scared! i live in Alaska were wolves live!!
Posted by: Casey | October 2, 2010 10:54 PM
Amazed and scared! i live in Alaska were wolves live!!
Posted by: Casey | October 2, 2010 10:54 PM
it was a great story but kind of creepy :]
Posted by: yesenia venegas | October 3, 2010 02:12 PM
it was a great story but kind of creepy :]
Posted by: yesenia venegas | October 3, 2010 02:13 PM
im super scared of werewolves and im in highschool. im definatly sleeping with a knife next to me tonight
Posted by: dstomp | October 6, 2010 12:37 AM
This is the most scariest stories I even read
Posted by: chan | October 6, 2010 02:18 AM
this was scary and exciting at the same time
Posted by: Alex Bultez | October 8, 2010 09:46 PM
Luved it! It was pretty scary ;)
Posted by: Audrey Moonan | October 9, 2010 11:31 AM
At least you had the smarts to call it a werewolf, because real wolves wouldn't do such things unless they had rabies. Not very scary, but I must say you did put some detail in it. The only reason why I chose this is because I am a wolf lover, and I just wanted to see how scary this really was. No offense on you, but it didn't scare me and I don't think it is scary enough to scare my classmates. This is my homework assignment, so I hope to send shivers up their spines!
Posted by: Raven | October 11, 2010 05:19 PM
I think they should have added a little more to the end like the parents reaction to their dead daughter.
Posted by: Anonymous | October 18, 2010 03:46 PM
ok how did she hear her parents coming down the driveway before she died and then after she died they came down the driveway
Posted by: Anonymous | October 19, 2010 07:44 PM
that was actually pretty scary!
Posted by: Anonymous | October 21, 2010 09:40 AM
it was awsome and a little scary
Posted by: kayla dalton | October 22, 2010 09:47 AM
um i had a dream just like that when i was about 8......but the wolf stayed in the front yard...
Posted by: Anonymous | October 22, 2010 04:43 PM
oh come on ya'll it doesnt matter how scary it is ... i loved it wolfs are totally my favorite animals so time i do wish i was one lol XD
Posted by: bryna | October 25, 2010 04:12 PM
ok....Why the hell are you criticizing dorkos i bet half of you couldnt wright anything that was half this good without copying (no offense to anyone who said it was a good story)
Posted by: Rebecca | October 25, 2010 04:54 PM
I loooooove this story!!!!!! It was way to unclear though. I think her Dad turned into the white wolf because he's the person who told her she had to stay alone,right?
Posted by: Dangerous | October 25, 2010 09:01 PM
what the freak r u guys talking about when you say that they got the white wolf's tooth mixed up with the headlights?
i don't understand this at all.
I loved the story though!
freaking awesome!
Posted by: Lief | October 28, 2010 06:34 PM
You are ready to scare me out of my wits! OMG!!!!!
Posted by: Georgia Mctinoch | October 30, 2010 04:59 PM
I found the ending a little bit of a let down, personally.
But I like it. It's a good story.
Posted by: MayaDarkling | October 30, 2010 05:55 PM
WOW THIS WAS SCARY BUT THE ENDING WAS CORNY DID HER PARENTS FIND HER DEAD KEEP WRITING STORIES!!!!!!!!!!!!! OTHER THAN THAT IT WAS GOOD
Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2010 09:35 PM
I wonder if her parents found what was left of her body???
Posted by: Ananomous | November 1, 2010 08:07 PM
it wasn't really scary at all it's just a story thats all.
Posted by: baby | November 2, 2010 05:25 PM
i loved this story. If anyone finds more awsome ones they should tell me where to read them at.
Posted by: dj | November 5, 2010 12:22 PM
Really good story... animals attacking are scarier than demons because you can't pray animals away!!!! Nicely done!!
Posted by: Louna | November 25, 2010 12:03 AM
I loved this story. It reminds me of my white dog. Althought it did scare the living daylights out of me.
Posted by: White wolf | December 16, 2010 10:52 PM
I heard a story like this before. Except it was a hunter and he was hunting the wolf. His friends found him dead in the woods.
Posted by: Hikari | December 22, 2010 08:49 PM
Wow! I don't think I want to stay home alone anymore!!!!
Posted by: Ananomous | December 26, 2010 08:52 PM
i liked this story very much. it was interesting and suspensful but i knew she hadnt gotten away from the wolf becasue that would have been a very boring story. this is a very good piece of writing. i love it!!!!1
Posted by: Anonymous | January 3, 2011 09:44 PM
This was so scary I won't be able to sleep alone tonight. I'll gave to get my mom to let my dog Sparky lay with me.
Posted by: Amanda | January 8, 2011 05:34 PM
I love wolves but this story is pretty scary it gave my the chills....
Posted by: Rebecca | February 2, 2011 06:42 PM
Wow the end was really scary ripping out her throat
Posted by: vickythetoilet | February 6, 2011 07:26 AM
Why did she run away? She should ask for help by using phone.
Posted by: KK | February 6, 2011 11:30 PM
This wolf was EPIC!!!!!!!
I don't care want all of the rest of you think. This story needs to be more gruesome.
Posted by: Epic Anonymous | February 8, 2011 10:24 AM
me again still epic wolf. . . .more blood
Posted by: Epic Anonymous | February 8, 2011 10:32 AM
i first heard this story in scary stories to tell in the dark
Posted by: Anonymous | February 8, 2011 07:21 PM
Soooooooooooo
coooooooooool people say this is boring but it awesome!
Posted by: Taylor Swift | February 19, 2011 11:42 PM
wow thats really scary
Posted by: Anonymous | February 20, 2011 08:38 PM
it was kind-of boring. I love ghosts and love to be a ghost hunter but I really want a story that will give me chills.
Posted by: Anonymous | February 23, 2011 04:42 PM
it was okay
Posted by: kylie | March 4, 2011 10:39 AM
it was good but too short
Posted by: Anonymous | March 7, 2011 04:33 PM
me and my freinds were sharing a laptop when we came across this story and me or my freinds will never sleep again...ps.I dont want my throat ripped out!
Posted by: selena | March 10, 2011 02:05 PM
Aw a white wolf sooooo cute.... Uh but it was sad when the girl had her throat viciously ripped from her neck the blood gushing out like a horrendous water fall. Such an awesome story. If I was that girl I would be silent and hide in the bathroom.
Posted by: Makala Mayberry | March 19, 2011 12:28 PM
awescme
Posted by: Anonymous | March 27, 2011 02:16 PM
i think i remeber my mother telling me this story haha.... nice.
Posted by: julie | May 17, 2011 03:53 PM
Best scary story I'v ever heard. Scared me right down to deaths door step. OMG
Posted by: Winnie the Pooh | May 25, 2011 11:53 AM
awsome story i loved it how the wolf won wolves are the best.
Posted by: robert | May 25, 2011 01:58 PM
awwwwwwwwsooooome THIs was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: jesse | June 10, 2011 10:38 PM
thats unfortionate for celia.
Posted by: PERSON | July 8, 2011 06:05 PM
i would have run down the street to my parents car and banged on the windows beggingthem to let me in.
Posted by: jakiya | July 22, 2011 01:55 PM
Ooh so close.
Posted by: MIke | July 23, 2011 02:34 AM
I thought it was okay coulda had a bit more statistics at the end but other than that it was pretty good:)
Posted by: Kayla | July 23, 2011 09:54 PM
poor girl! where's her hope?
Posted by: ryan | July 24, 2011 12:58 AM
woah that was pretty scary since it was supposed to be a nightmare. I freaked out
Posted by: Ricrado | October 31, 2011 11:34 AM