Axe Murder Hollow
A Pennsylvania Ghost Story
retold by S.E. Schlosser
Susan and Ned were driving through a wooded empty section of highway. Lightning flashed, thunder roared, the sky went dark in the torrential downpour.
“We’d better stop,” said Susan.
Ned nodded his head in agreement. He stepped on the brake, and suddenly the car started to slide on the slick pavement. They plunged off the road and slid to a halt at the bottom of an incline.
Pale and shaking, Ned quickly turned to check if Susan was all right. When she nodded, Ned relaxed and looked through the rain soaked windows.
“I’m going to see how bad it is,” he told Susan, and when out into the storm. She saw his blurry figure in the headlight, walking around the front of the car. A moment later, he jumped in beside her, soaking wet.
“The car’s not badly damaged, but we’re wheel-deep in mud,” he said. “I’m going to have to go for help.”
Susan swallowed nervously. There would be no quick rescue here. He told her to turn off the headlights and lock the doors until he returned.
Ax Murder Hollow. Although Ned hadn’t said the name aloud, they both knew what he had been thinking when he told her to lock the car. This was the place where a man had once taken an axe and hacked his wife to death in a jealous rage over an alleged affair. Supposedly, the axe-wielding spirit of the husband continued to haunt this section of the road.
Outside the car, Susan heard a shriek, a loud thump, and a strange gurgling noise. But she couldn’t see anything in the darkness.
Frightened, she shrank down into her seat. She sat in silence for a while, and then she noticed another sound. Bump. Bump. Bump. It was a soft sound, like something being blown by the wind.
Suddenly, the car was illuminated by a bright light. An official sounding voice told her to get out of the car. Ned must have found a police officer. Susan unlocked the door and stepped out of the car. As her eyes adjusted to the bright light, she saw it.
Hanging by his feet from the tree next to the car was the dead body of Ned. His bloody throat had been cut so deeply that he was nearly decapitated. The wind swung his corpse back and forth so that it thumped against the tree. Bump. Bump. Bump.
Susan screamed and ran toward the voice and the light. As she drew close, she realized the light was not coming from a flashlight. Standing there was the glowing figure of a man with a smile on his face and a large, solid, and definitely real axe in his hands. She backed away from the glowing figure until she bumped into the car.
“Playing around when my back was turned,” the ghost whispered, stroking the sharp blade of the axe with his fingers. “You’ve been very naughty.”
The last thing she saw was the glint of the axe blade in the eerie, incandescent light.
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Comments
this story left me on the edge on my seat... i wanted more!
Posted by: Aly | April 14, 2009 09:02 PM
OMG! OMG! OMG! are you serioius? that story just scared the h*ll out of me! no joke! that is scary!!!! I cant believe that..=[!!!!
Posted by: casey | April 24, 2009 11:18 AM
That was Scary! You Should read it.
Posted by: Lexi | August 20, 2009 01:04 PM
cool lol ms sandy scary
Posted by: Coley | August 22, 2009 08:51 PM
r u f@**ing serious dude where do you get your stories at
Posted by: rebecca | October 3, 2009 06:12 PM
omg after i read the story, my phone rang and it scared the crap out of me!!!
Posted by: Addyson | October 19, 2009 06:19 PM
OMG!!!! that wuz awesome!! I love scary stories! you should totally write a longer book about that! :)
Posted by: lol luver | October 27, 2009 04:28 PM
that was so scary were do you get does stories
Posted by: Aldo | October 27, 2009 05:05 PM
thas so scaryyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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Posted by: max | October 27, 2009 05:49 PM
nice storie
Posted by: Anonymous | October 27, 2009 06:10 PM
that was a pretty kool story
Posted by: david | October 28, 2009 01:55 PM
boring lol
Posted by: kacy | October 28, 2009 02:30 PM
i wove it!! lol i want more of it!! hahahaha LOL!
Posted by: Anonymous | October 28, 2009 03:01 PM
omg i LOVED IT! gotta tell me where u got it
Posted by: anonymous | October 28, 2009 03:47 PM
like ur story
Posted by: nikkie | October 28, 2009 04:33 PM
om freking g amazinggggg
Posted by: lover girl 101 | October 28, 2009 05:25 PM
i need scary sh** not this punkin pie
Posted by: erica anders | October 28, 2009 05:39 PM
That was so scary even though i was in a room full of people that scared the crap out of me.
Posted by: scaredy cat | October 28, 2009 05:43 PM
That story wuz awsome I have to read a ghost story in school 2morrow and im using that one lol
Posted by: Anonymous | October 28, 2009 06:05 PM
that Wus f**in scary
Posted by: Anonymous | October 28, 2009 06:41 PM
wow
Posted by: Anonymous | October 28, 2009 06:44 PM
OMG!! best story I read all day. Ganna tell my friends and scare the. Crapp out of them
Posted by: Ena | October 28, 2009 08:38 PM
OMG!!!!! this is the best f**ng story i've ever heard.
Posted by: Anonymous | October 28, 2009 09:07 PM
that was da best story ever....but wanna hear more....leaves me wanting more...love it....
Posted by: Jamie | October 29, 2009 01:54 AM
OMG!!!! but thats probley not real soooo nothin to be scared about
Posted by: cheyenne | October 29, 2009 11:21 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Posted by: Anonymous | October 29, 2009 02:03 PM
OMG SO TOTALLY NOT SCARY lol its just like bloody marry i even tryed to summon her once
Posted by: Aden | October 29, 2009 07:48 PM
COOL story it scared the crap out of me specially my little brother.
Posted by: Rafael | October 29, 2009 09:13 PM
You people and your terrible grammar make my skin crawl.
Posted by: Anonymous | October 29, 2009 11:20 PM
omg that did not scare me !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: katy | October 30, 2009 08:18 AM
thats wach
Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2009 09:02 AM
OMG!!
I couldn't believe how scary it is!!This can't be real!
Posted by: rosssy | October 30, 2009 09:59 AM
That was so scary i have chills running down my back yall should make a book:(((
Posted by: sarah | October 30, 2009 10:58 AM
that was f***in scary. wat were u thikin? is it true?that was b****in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPY TIIIIIIIIIIME.............................agreed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: ladyman | October 30, 2009 11:29 AM
L.A.M.E
Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2009 12:36 PM
this story was so scary
Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2009 03:09 PM
That Story is so scary it's way better than all the other crap i'v read.And i think that it gets five stars *****
Posted by: Claudia | October 30, 2009 03:30 PM
is that real?
Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2009 03:52 PM
that was the scariest story ever u must right another 1
Posted by: matt | October 30, 2009 03:52 PM
that was not scary it isint real
Posted by: jamee lloll | October 30, 2009 04:14 PM
ok that was really disturbing....i have a sleepover tonight, i might just tell that one to make every one wet themselves! haha
Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2009 04:27 PM
OMG OMG that was a cool story i read it on halloween last year and i was scared sh**t i did't sleep all night i just kept seeing the axe man so i lit the pumpkin and hoped that i would forget about it but then i just saw susan and the axe man in the flame in the end i whent to my mum and dads room and slept for a hour before i had to wake up!that was a weird halloween last year but this year i am not reading it agin.(the story is soooo scary)
Posted by: Sara | October 30, 2009 04:43 PM
that was not scary at all it was good and long! i thought it wud b scaryer but awell ...........................................
Posted by: fiona | October 30, 2009 04:59 PM
WOW...NOT SCARY!!!
Posted by: parawhore | October 30, 2009 05:46 PM
i give that 5 stars ********** ok mayb 10 stars cuz it was awesome
Posted by: kylie | October 30, 2009 06:31 PM
omg!that scared the f***k outta me!
Posted by: jane doe | October 30, 2009 09:08 PM
hate it so boring! it's like reading a story in school!
Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 01:32 AM
love it! man i can still hear my heart plusing!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 01:35 AM
those that say its boring must have no life cause it was better than some of the axe storys!
Posted by: anonymous | October 31, 2009 01:46 AM
OMFG!!! That scaryed the S*it out of me!!!
Posted by: musicsinmysoul | October 31, 2009 08:16 AM
Try to think of a scarier story that was lame.It didn't even scare my 6 year old daughter! Lame
Posted by: Kim | October 31, 2009 08:45 AM
this story was so scary
Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 09:38 AM
? not scary at all, u fails!
Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 09:52 AM
that waz relly scary i am only 10 stop trying to scare me lol
Posted by: jane | October 31, 2009 09:53 AM
that was an lame story bloody mary was scarier than this sh**t! next time make it a little scary -gosh im reading this on halloween and im not scared!!
Posted by: none | October 31, 2009 10:22 AM
that was not scary at all.i dont know why they posted that
Posted by: aleshia | October 31, 2009 10:24 AM
That story was f-ing trippy. I liked it a lot. You should write a book.
Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 01:31 PM
IT WASN'T THAT SCARY BUT IT WAS ENTERTAINING
Posted by: bEaSt mOde | October 31, 2009 01:38 PM
Horror Man
Posted by: Rodney Williamson | October 31, 2009 01:42 PM
ahh not that good
Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 05:04 PM
not very scary to me.
Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 05:15 PM
Just entertaining...
Posted by: Maya | October 31, 2009 06:39 PM
omg omg omg omg i used to live in pennsylvania and now im freaked out lol i was so tensed while reading this my mom was wondering wat was wrong with me omg that was scary!
Posted by: lizzy | October 31, 2009 07:01 PM
I think this story was stupid. it needs a ending. i was disappointed when i read this!!!!!
Posted by: hillary | October 31, 2009 07:03 PM
omg my mom is working out when i read it it scared the crap out of me
Posted by: kim | November 1, 2009 09:04 AM
Wow that was really scary
Posted by: Anonymous | November 1, 2009 12:45 PM
omg that was soooo scary!
Posted by: hannah | November 1, 2009 02:01 PM
it is a real story live near where the story takes place
Posted by: me | November 9, 2009 11:47 AM
OMG that story was so boring but entataning lol xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxneed to make it longer
Posted by: stephanie | December 5, 2009 11:45 AM
That knocked my socks off! It's high time you wrote an anthology of spooky stories. You should read some of them at a library, and write more material. In a good way. I luhv your work. I hope to hear more of it on this website.
Posted by: no name please | December 5, 2009 06:45 PM
ARE TOU SERIOUS OMG!OMG!OMG!NASTY
Posted by: Anonymous | December 8, 2009 03:27 PM
wowthat wasnt scary at all
Posted by: C_LOS | December 9, 2009 06:43 PM
i bet that could really happen but with a real man not no ghost
Posted by: jason | December 19, 2009 09:12 PM
OMFG!
Its so freaking scary!
I live in pennsylvania too :l
Posted by: Nicole | December 23, 2009 02:50 PM
that was not scary
Posted by: asw | December 27, 2009 07:39 PM
i did not get scary
Posted by: lesly | December 28, 2009 03:00 PM
hey that was a reall good story!!!!! hha i loved the u have been very naughty i say that ALL the time!!!
Posted by: buggy | December 29, 2009 03:23 PM
Nice story.It didn't scare me because i'm not scared of ANYTHING but it was cool. =]
Posted by: Savannah | December 30, 2009 11:28 AM
I've been there. We stopped to see what would happen. It was dark outside and we heard something hitting the car. Me friend and I left right away. It was way too freaky
Posted by: ashley | January 6, 2010 04:19 PM
any more axe murder hollow stories?????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: skylar | January 7, 2010 07:47 PM
THAT WAS S**T SCARY I WANT MORE!!
Posted by: Anonymous | January 9, 2010 01:14 AM
omg i thought thats was the supidest stoier id ever red
Posted by: alexys | January 9, 2010 01:44 PM
omg omg this story is a copy of a true story that my aunt told me but insteead its called hangmans hollow and its a real road in penn hills pennsylvania
Posted by: Anonymous | January 9, 2010 10:30 PM
WOW SCARY OR WHAT
Posted by: LittleMissMemi | January 13, 2010 12:07 PM
Wow that scared the shizz out of me!!
Posted by: Mandy | January 13, 2010 12:56 PM
im sorry but i have heard way scarier stories than that i think they need to make there stories idk more realistic
Posted by: Brianna | January 15, 2010 07:24 PM
Hmm ALL YOU PEOPLE GET OVER YOURSELF IF YOUR UNDER 10. Seriously??
THAT WASNT SCARY AT ALL!
This IS SCARY.
A six year old girl woke up with a zit on her cheek. She ignored cause she's been having that lately. Next 2 weeks the so called zit kept getting bigger and bigger until she was scared and worried. She told her mom. and her mom advice was to go wash it off. So she then took a warm bath. And accidently hit the zit. The zit burst and hundreds of baby spiders went out.
she found out a mother spider laid eggs on her cheek.
Posted by: Nikki(: | January 17, 2010 02:11 PM
It was scarry, well not really ive been thru worst.i am a shaman.
Posted by: jazzy | January 19, 2010 03:23 AM
that was a f***ing scary story but i've heard scarier
Posted by: makenzie winks | January 19, 2010 01:05 PM
Dude that story scared the crap out of me
Posted by: olivia | January 19, 2010 04:31 PM
wow now dats really scary man... i want to find out wat happens next!!!
Posted by: Desiree | January 21, 2010 11:20 AM
its pretty dumb as der is no proper ending. if it was den awesum!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | January 21, 2010 11:56 AM
That wasn't scary for me.When it is bed time i will tell this story to my family and see how freaked out they get
Posted by: Snowy | January 22, 2010 08:22 AM
i dont know if that was real or not but i know a better one
Posted by: Anonymous | January 22, 2010 04:33 PM
omg you can do better!!
Posted by: Anonymous | January 22, 2010 04:36 PM
I know a better story it was about this married couple they were on the ohio brige they had a wreck and went into the water and died. if you go down to the ohio bridge on halloween night you will see the woman looking for her husband and she is carrying her chopped off head and sometimes she gets real nervous and screams
Posted by: daisy | January 22, 2010 04:48 PM
that scared the heck out of me
Posted by: Anonymous | January 26, 2010 03:51 PM
wowowowowoowowowowo sary but it was a very nice love story hahahahahaha woooooooooooooooow
Posted by: joe | January 30, 2010 12:23 PM
OMG THAT STORY WAS SO SCARY i ALMOST WET MY PANTS WHERE DID YOU FIND IT?
Posted by: Anonymous | January 31, 2010 09:24 AM
if i saw a monster i would knock the hell out of him good day
Posted by: cajae pooh pooh | January 31, 2010 08:26 PM
it wasnt that scary but the ending wasnt that good he needs more
Posted by: kekee | February 1, 2010 05:28 PM
idk....this really wasnt that scary.i read it to my mom and my mom likes it but she doesnt think its scary...well not that scary
Posted by: lilly | February 1, 2010 07:22 PM
That WAS SO SCARY MY SISTERS THOUGHT IT WAS SCARY!!!!!!!OMG IT SCARED THE CRAP OUT OF ME TO
Posted by: Makayla | February 1, 2010 08:14 PM
I grew up in Erie and it was a great hangout for teens drinking and partying and scary as hell. Its one of those places you always remember and the story.
Posted by: tina | February 3, 2010 10:37 PM
This isnt scary just freeky !
Posted by: Abbie | February 4, 2010 03:16 PM
That story was OK, but not great. I'm kind of disappointed. A little scary.
Posted by: Bobby | February 7, 2010 11:30 AM
if gt 1 but how do u put it on there
Posted by: annonymous | February 8, 2010 04:11 PM
That Was So Freaky
Posted by: Hannah | February 8, 2010 04:11 PM
u know what u ppl have no taste on horror stories i have read al of em and that one is soooo not scary
Posted by: alec | February 9, 2010 04:22 PM
spooky
Posted by: edward | February 10, 2010 12:00 PM
simple and comedy storyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Posted by: sahil | February 11, 2010 09:11 AM
wtf man super creepy.girls name reminds me of a girl i no
Posted by: tj | February 11, 2010 06:59 PM
story was most unscary story i have read
Posted by: that kid | February 12, 2010 04:25 PM
wow I was blown away with that
Posted by: Sila | February 13, 2010 09:44 AM
cool man scary!
Posted by: nightmare | February 13, 2010 02:11 PM
I got a scary story if little kids don't behave a man comes out of the closet but y dose he do that well when he was alive he used 2 kidnap kids and then eat their guts, eyes and their brain but then the other people found out and killed him and now he wants revenge
Posted by: karol | February 13, 2010 10:14 PM
the was #%^#@ scarey
Posted by: person | February 14, 2010 04:51 PM
Omg! while i was reading this my phone like rang and i coudn't find it crap! this is scary BUT I LOVED IT!
Posted by: erica | February 15, 2010 01:24 PM
awesomeee!!!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | February 15, 2010 06:27 PM
really a good book
Posted by: ian | February 16, 2010 04:50 PM
i wish the story would go on and on and on
Posted by: cheyenne | February 17, 2010 09:13 PM
scary
Posted by: Anonymous | February 18, 2010 11:52 AM
i probibly sound like an idiot but is that true??:(
Posted by: gillian | February 19, 2010 09:29 AM
this is so gay and stupid
Posted by: stephanie | February 19, 2010 06:21 PM
this is gay so GAY i want to leave peace out suckers
Posted by: stephanie | February 19, 2010 06:22 PM
that wasn't scary
Posted by: Anonymous | February 19, 2010 11:32 PM
its like a hawaiian story i heard >.< really scary
Posted by: Anonymous | February 20, 2010 12:19 AM
yeah right
Posted by: Anonymous | February 20, 2010 09:55 AM
sic
Posted by: Anonymous | February 22, 2010 11:33 AM
omg that is ssssssssssssooooooooo.stupid i have seen more scary.
Posted by: Anonymous | February 23, 2010 06:31 PM
suuupeeer scaaaryyy!!!!!!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | February 24, 2010 10:22 AM
it waz very s*** not scary at all
Posted by: Anonymous | February 25, 2010 06:30 AM
nothing interesting or scary,i think it's incomplete.Also,it's a repeated story.once it starts,it ends.
Posted by: Anonymous | February 26, 2010 03:57 AM
this story rock i love story like this lol so do my famliy and freinds and i am only 16
Posted by: Arriebelle | February 26, 2010 12:46 PM
I guess that was kinda scary, but stories don't scare me that much.
Although...
THAT STORY WAS FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!!
Posted by: marisa | February 28, 2010 10:22 AM
this is a f****** dumb story
Posted by: Anonymous | March 1, 2010 02:47 PM
THIS STORY WAS SAD!
Posted by: Anonymous | March 1, 2010 11:36 PM
THIS STORY WAZ WECKED;)
Posted by: AONYMOUS | March 1, 2010 11:49 PM
that was okaiii i guess i no loaads of better ones than that u guys fallll
Posted by: Angle Of Death2010 | March 2, 2010 01:35 PM
omg...omg...omg...dat is all i got 3 say is omg.....omg...omg....
Posted by: Anonymous | March 5, 2010 07:32 PM
that was freakin scary oooooooommmmmmmmmmmmgggggggggggg
Posted by: halee | March 7, 2010 08:00 PM
this was freaky
Posted by: Anonymous | March 13, 2010 03:22 PM
rocki'n story.
Posted by: Anonymous | March 14, 2010 04:05 PM
omg i scared :(
Posted by: Anonymous | March 17, 2010 02:51 PM
Wow lolz this is scary but my gwanpa told me this story except he said the cereal killer in greenwood and there was nothing about a ghost but the man was alive and didnt say names just used the girl and the boy and the boy's nails was scratching the top of the car and a police officer got the girl but the girl didn't die the police got to her I hate my gwanpa so much somtimes
Posted by: Brittany | March 19, 2010 01:32 PM
i love this story it is not scary for me. is it scary for you?
Posted by: andrea | March 22, 2010 11:42 AM
this is the worst scary story ever. i hope you get hacked by a glowing ghost.
Posted by: the journalism class | March 24, 2010 04:26 PM
O.O
Scary!!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | March 24, 2010 05:06 PM
O.O
Scary!!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | March 24, 2010 05:07 PM
that was crazzzzzyyyyyyyyyyy
Posted by: Anonymous | March 24, 2010 06:41 PM
u r stupid if u think that is scary
Posted by: Anonymous | March 26, 2010 12:38 AM
ok ummm that was not really scary no offense but it was not original AT ALL
Posted by: Anonymous | March 28, 2010 05:12 PM
gay much
Posted by: Anonymous | March 28, 2010 06:23 PM
G.A.Y...it was ok
Posted by: Anonymous | March 28, 2010 08:11 PM
cool
Posted by: Anonymous | April 1, 2010 09:49 AM
this was a REAL scary story.... it gave ME chills!
Posted by: jennifer | April 1, 2010 01:58 PM
That was dumb.
Posted by: Savannah | April 1, 2010 11:41 PM
omg i read this story at a sleep over and the doorbell rang cuz of thee pizza guy it scared the h*ll out of me and my friend screamed holy sh*t
Posted by: samantha | April 5, 2010 09:13 AM
I want more they should make some more
Posted by: Anonymous | April 6, 2010 12:25 PM
Ya scary scary NOT it would be for a 5 year old (hopefully)
Posted by: Crazylittlekid20 | April 6, 2010 04:08 PM
I definitely wouldn't want to see or meet that lunatic! Aren't there any ghost police whom we can contact and report this one?
Posted by: me | April 8, 2010 02:19 AM
I read this over spring break at 12 o'clock in the morning, I didn't even fall asleep till 2!!! This is the best story that I read yet! Upload some more like these! My gf hates me now cuz I sent this to her :D
Posted by: Josh | April 9, 2010 05:25 PM
my god! i almost crapped my pants when i read that !!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: Delila | April 11, 2010 02:02 PM
STUPD
Posted by: Anonymous | April 14, 2010 08:21 PM
u ppl r lame dat wuz nt scary
Posted by: Anonymous | April 17, 2010 11:31 AM
like it! hmmmm!! i want more!
Posted by: ilove kisses | April 18, 2010 01:24 AM
that was so scary
Posted by: Lauren | April 18, 2010 10:40 AM
This is tottttallly the most scary story I've read on here! Seriously! And I'm tough 2 scare! U guys should read no tresspassing its similiar but not as scary! Dude where do u get this stuff???????? :)
Posted by: tori | April 18, 2010 04:53 PM
that was not scary at allllllll
Posted by: Anonymous | April 19, 2010 03:41 PM
that was scary tell me more
Posted by: Anonymous | April 20, 2010 04:45 PM
very pridictable
Posted by: Anonymous | April 22, 2010 05:49 AM
I'm hard to scare when it comes to stories that are supposed to scare people.
Posted by: Anonymous | April 23, 2010 08:04 PM
that story was awsome it scared me im like OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! that part when it told me the part when the guy had an axe and the guy killed Ned on the throte ittttttt wasssssss soooooooo coolllllllllll
Posted by: kelsey | April 25, 2010 01:59 PM
well i Have to admit it was scary but it could have been better i mean but hey thats just my opinion :D
Posted by: Anonymous | April 25, 2010 03:30 PM
that was a good story
Posted by: Anonymous | April 26, 2010 11:47 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG THAT WAS COOOOOOLLL PIMP DAD OUT
Posted by: Anonymous | April 28, 2010 02:42 PM
Awsome!!! If I had a choice to rate this story between the numbers 1 to 10... I would have to rate it 101% of complete awsomeness!!!!
Posted by: OMG! | April 28, 2010 04:42 PM
OMG iloved this story it was so amazing dude were u get those stories?
Posted by: trinidad | April 28, 2010 06:56 PM
not scary at all
Posted by: K-WOWWZ | April 28, 2010 09:00 PM
omg it was totally the best story ever
Posted by: anonymous | April 29, 2010 03:05 PM
that was creepie
Posted by: hi | April 29, 2010 05:22 PM
AWSOME STORY
Posted by: SPIKY | May 1, 2010 01:40 PM
OMG that was scary!!!
Posted by: michael | May 2, 2010 01:52 PM
omg that was very scary!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | May 4, 2010 06:26 PM
this waz good
Posted by: kristina | May 6, 2010 03:43 PM
that was gay
Posted by: anonymous | May 7, 2010 01:24 AM
OMG my mouse slid acrossed the tabel!!! I was so scared then my phone rang 3 times and stopped!!!then again.and im alone in the house!!!!!
RING RING RING went the phone then i answerd it and it was a song called tIk ToK
Posted by: samantha | May 7, 2010 06:48 PM
are you guys serious? this wasnt scary are you all like, 8 years old or something? get a life.
Posted by: Danielle | May 8, 2010 06:42 PM
you ever hard of the story the hook basically the same thing but he was string above the car and was tied to the car when she was trying to go away the car made the noose get tighter
Posted by: anonymous | May 9, 2010 09:47 PM
that was the most cheesey story that we have ever heard but i have 2 say that it was pretty scary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: aiyanna and gwen | May 11, 2010 09:28 AM
cool
Posted by: Anonymous | May 11, 2010 12:53 PM
that was not scary it was gruesome and some bits were scary
but auwesome strory altho it werent scary
Posted by: Anonymous | May 12, 2010 12:04 PM
wow that story was soooo scary!! I have 2 read a scary story in class tomorrow and this is the one i am gonna read!!!
Posted by: justin bieber16 | May 12, 2010 12:41 PM
Holy s***! I am so reading that to nine year olds!
Posted by: Alexis | May 14, 2010 09:58 AM
that was scary !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :+
Posted by: Anonymous | May 16, 2010 08:13 PM
why the ghost kill the boy?
Posted by: Anonymous | May 16, 2010 09:47 PM
rrrrrr ok =0 lol
Posted by: Elisha | May 17, 2010 12:49 AM
swweeet
Posted by: irving | May 17, 2010 12:49 PM
Wow i'm like. . .scared lol that was a very good story and i hope there's a sequel :)
Posted by: Tara Swanson | May 18, 2010 11:44 AM
ohh my god u almost made me piss on my trousers
Posted by: Anonymous | May 18, 2010 01:12 PM
um this was a really good story this was a cheap imitation of texas chainsaw maasacree
Posted by: wat do u care | May 20, 2010 01:03 PM
wot da hel was dat???!!!
so not scary
Posted by: udonidano | May 20, 2010 01:07 PM
i have to admit this was WAY better then the bloody mary story.
Posted by: Anonymous | May 21, 2010 10:00 AM
interesting, but needs more backround to build up more suspense and isnt as obvious
Posted by: Anonymous | May 21, 2010 07:47 PM
I live in erie....and me and my buddies go there all the time and it is a creepy place. the building is burned down but gypsies and abandoned houses surround the area
Posted by: Anonymous | May 21, 2010 11:02 PM
This was sooo not scary
Posted by: ebbi | May 22, 2010 07:14 AM
damn this was so freakin scary!this is just like the NO TRESSPASSING story(on this website)! i wish they'd make a horror movie about this!!
Posted by: cherry | May 22, 2010 10:31 PM
thats mint
Posted by: Anonymous | May 24, 2010 08:42 AM
nice i like scary stories
Posted by: Anonymous | May 25, 2010 02:35 PM
OH MY GOSH! THAT WAS AWESOME! I NEED TO FREAK MY FRIENDS OUT WITH THAT.
Posted by: Sarah | May 25, 2010 04:52 PM
OMG i hope this not happen to me.. so freaking scary and nasty
Posted by: Monica Santos | May 27, 2010 09:27 AM
that waz awsome
Posted by: Anonymous | May 27, 2010 11:48 AM
OMG?!?! IT WUZ VERY SURPRISING AND ALL BUT IT WUSNT THAT SCARY I MEAN WHO IN THE H*LL WOULD GET OUT OF THE CAR U WAIT TILL SOMEONE U KNOW KNOCKS ON THE WINDOW OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT BUT HONESTLY IT WUSNT THAT SCARY H*LL IT WUSNT SCARY!!!!!!
Posted by: kim | May 27, 2010 05:49 PM
OMG while i was reading the end, my sister's gay emo songs came on and i almost had a heart attack!
Posted by: wow.. | June 2, 2010 02:19 AM
OMG THAT IS F***EN SCARY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | June 2, 2010 02:09 PM
haha i get to go back there for the 15th time in october and 3 years ago i swear i saw someone in the trees. i go every year on halloween.
it IS a true story. i live in pennsylvania too.
Posted by: ashley D. | June 2, 2010 05:37 PM
siht yrots si yrev driew lets see who can crack this code
Posted by: joel abelardo reta juarez | June 2, 2010 06:17 PM
That left me hanging. u r a awsome writer. u should write a book.
Posted by: Anonymous | June 5, 2010 12:43 PM
freaky man just freaky!!
Posted by: bill | June 7, 2010 02:12 PM
OMG!!! that story was awesome! i love scary stories and even i have to admit that was pretty good!! you should right a book!!
Posted by: Anonymous | June 8, 2010 05:30 PM
omg i hate scary stories but we r doin this thing were we tell each other stories ahhhhh dont tell me such scary stuff
Posted by: clarissa | June 9, 2010 04:33 AM
o kewl i want to be susan
Posted by: dassssss | June 9, 2010 11:40 PM
That was crappy, didn't scare me at all.
Posted by: Jasmine | June 12, 2010 12:28 PM
♥ it! good one! :)
Posted by: Anonymous | June 12, 2010 04:52 PM
its so gross how they said ned was blowing in the wind and bumping in to the tree it was so sad!!!
Posted by: tessa liz & jewel | June 12, 2010 09:35 PM
that was so scary!! after i read someone knocked on the door and it scared the living crap outta me
Posted by: audrey | June 14, 2010 02:27 PM
scary or bloody what!!!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | June 16, 2010 10:05 AM
um if they both died how who saw the ghost????? and could still talk about it?
Posted by: robbytrees | June 21, 2010 03:21 PM
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And she died to! AWESOME! That was cooler then the haunting hour! AWESOME!!!!!!!!
Posted by: lexi | June 24, 2010 12:54 PM
WOW ....that was scaaary!!! Was it true???
Posted by: Robii | June 26, 2010 04:07 PM
it was ok
Posted by: Anonymous | June 27, 2010 03:07 PM
good
Posted by: Anonymous | June 27, 2010 03:12 PM
there we go finaly a skin crawling storie. yeah babie that shiz was scariieee.
Posted by: taylorr | June 27, 2010 09:45 PM
it was not scary at all
Posted by: ebtihal | June 28, 2010 05:52 AM
tis story was sooooooooooooo scary that i jumped when my phone rang
Posted by: karla | June 28, 2010 02:14 PM
loooooook!! wht's behind of you?!!
Posted by: Anonymous | June 29, 2010 03:29 AM
awsome
Posted by: joe | June 29, 2010 02:22 PM
lol u think that was scary ? omg listen to my version. once there was a ouple driving along and there had been reports of a freeky figure moving through teh woods were they were and then they suddenly had a puncture so the husband got out and went in search of help and the wife locked the doors and after no time at all there was huge thunping noices coming from the roof but she was too scared to go out . but eventually the police came and said to her come out of the car its the police but what ever u do dont look back . but she did look back and saw the crazed axe man on the roof of her car holding an axe in 1 hand and the head of ........ her husband!!!!!!! lol
Posted by: jjake | June 30, 2010 11:57 AM
OMG?? SO AWSOME
Posted by: tinkerbell | June 30, 2010 04:21 PM
my computer made a noise as i read this and i jumped... this is scary
Posted by: Anonymous | July 1, 2010 12:32 AM
oh now my throat hurts. it was creepy, i wz on the edge of my seat! man, wat a cliffhanger! maybe i'll write my own ending...
Posted by: sportychic | July 1, 2010 01:21 PM
I read a version of that back in elementary school in a book of ghost stories I seem to have misplaced since then... There were only slight variations to the details...
Posted by: The Dead Body Man | July 2, 2010 07:29 AM
Omg I finished reading it and my sister opened the door...woah, u should have seen me, I jumped out of my pants and screamed for 3 min. I wuz soooo frikin scared!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: Cyra | July 2, 2010 05:01 PM
very spooky!totally awesome!
Posted by: aditi singh | July 3, 2010 05:36 AM
That was so scary
Posted by: Anonymous | July 6, 2010 12:14 PM
that was pretty good but i want to know what happend next!!!
Posted by: simrat | July 6, 2010 01:10 PM
that was the scariest thing i ever read
Posted by: Anonymous | July 7, 2010 09:37 PM
Really lame, was hoping for a scare.
Posted by: Jay | July 9, 2010 01:40 AM
that was not scary!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | July 11, 2010 06:55 PM
That wasnt so scary. Freakin lame
Posted by: Anonymous | July 11, 2010 11:56 PM
Sounds like an urban legend.
Posted by: Dezz | July 12, 2010 03:55 AM
lol that scared my little sister but me and my big sister wasn't scared at all!
Posted by: Anonymous | July 14, 2010 09:24 PM
That was scary!
Posted by: Krys | July 16, 2010 04:25 PM
thumbs up nice story
Posted by: will | July 16, 2010 05:02 PM
LOved this story...Freaked me out about the dude with the ax asking her to get out of the car...
Posted by: chelly2329 | July 17, 2010 11:53 AM
OMG THIS WAS THE SCARYEST STORY I READ I WAS SCARED TO DEATH
Posted by: bratz | July 17, 2010 04:31 PM
that was da worst story ever
Posted by: Anonymous | July 20, 2010 05:43 AM
yeah it is cool
Posted by: uknown | July 21, 2010 02:46 AM
i have heard so many different versions of this story. its one of my favorites!!!
Posted by: Marissa | July 21, 2010 12:12 PM
kinda scary
Posted by: Anonymous | July 21, 2010 05:55 PM
Ok, whoever wrote that spider/zit story (yes you Brianna) and you probably won't read this but moving on. #1 YOU know nothing bout scary cause and ax murderer is much scarier than a zit with spiders. Oh yeh and FYI thats not even how the spider story goes! Lame!!
Posted by: Gabi | July 24, 2010 11:47 PM
OMG that scared me so bad i could just emagen it. i want to here more! (In the day time of course or id be sh**ing my self at nite lol)
Posted by: Lilly | July 28, 2010 08:31 AM