Burnt Church
Retold by S.E. Schlosser
She was sophisticated, poised, and cultured. In retrospect, this should have made them suspicious. A teacher like her should be presiding over a girl’s school in London or New York, not seeking a position in a small town in Georgia. But at the time, they were too delighted by her application to ask any questions.
“It will be good for our daughter to learn some culture,” the attorney’s wife told the pastor’s wife.
“And our boy may find some table manners at last,” the pastor’s wife responded with a smile.
School was called into session in the local church shortly after the arrival of the teacher. And soon, the children were bringing glowing reports home. “Teacher” was special. Teacher taught them manners and diction as well as reading, writing and arithmetic. All the children loved teacher.
The parents were delighted by the progress their children were making at school. Teacher had been a real find. A God-send, said the preacher’s wife.
But not everyone in town was so satisfied. The local ne-er-do well – called Smith – had more sinister stories to tell.
“That woman ain’t natural,” he told the blacksmith, waving a bottle of whisky for emphasis. “I seen her out in the woods after dark, dancing around a campfire and chanting in a strange language.”
“Nonsense,” the blacksmith retorted, calmly hammering a headed iron bar on his anvil.
“They say she’s got an altar in her room and it ain’t an altar to the Almighty,” Smith insisted, leaning forward and blowing his boozy breath into the blacksmith’s face.
“You’re drunk,” said the blacksmith, lifting the hot iron so it barred the man from coming any closer. “Go home and sleep it off.”
Smith left the smithy, but he continued to talk wild about the Teacher in the weeks that followed. During those weeks, a change gradually came over the school children. The typical high-jinks and pranks that all children played lessened. Their laughter died away. And when they did misbehave, it was on a much more ominous scale than before. Items began to disappear from houses and farms. Expensive items like jewelry, farm tools, and money. When children talked back to their parents, there was a hard-edge to their voices, and they did not apologize for their rudeness, even when punished.
“And my daughter lied to me the other day,” the attorney’s wife said to the pastor’s wife in distress. “I saw her punch her younger brother and steal an apple from him, and she denied it to my face. She practically called me a liar!”
“The games the children play back in the woods frighten me,” the pastor’s wife confessed. “They chant in a strange language, and they move in such a strange manner. Almost like a ritual dance.”
“Could it be something they are learning at school?” asked the attorney’s wife.
“Surely not! Teacher is such a sweet, sophisticated lady,” said the pastor’s wife.
But they exchanged uneasy glances.
Smith, on the other hand, was sure. “That teacher is turning the young’uns to the Devil, that’s what she’s doing,” he proclaimed up and down the streets of the town.
“Don’t be ridiculous,” the preacher told him when they passed in front of the mercantile.
“I ain’t ridiculous. You are blind,” Smith told him. “That teacher ought to be burned at the stake, like they burned the witches in Salem.”
The pastor, pale with wrath, ordered Smith out of his sight. But the ne’er-do-well’s words rang in his mind and would not be pushed away. And the children continued to behave oddly. Almost like they were possessed. He would, the preacher decided reluctantly, have to look into it someday soon.
That day came sooner than he thought. The very next Monday, his little boy came down with a cold, and his mother kept him home from school. When the pastor returned from his duties for a late lunch, his wife came running up to him as soon as he entered the door. She was pale with fright.
“I heard him chanting something over and over again in his bedroom,” she gasped. “So I crept to the door to listen. He was saying the Lord’s Prayer backwards!”
The pastor gasped and clutched his Bible to his chest, as goose bumps erupted over his body. This was positively satanic. And there was nowhere the boy could have learned such a thing in this town, unless he learned it…at school.
At that moment, the attorney’s wife came bursting in the door behind him.
“Quick pastor, quick,” she cried. “Smith is running through town with a torch, talking about burning down the school. The children are still in class!”
The pastor raced out of the house with the two woman at his heels. They and the other townsfolk who followed them were met by a huge cloud of smoke coming from the direction of the church, where the school children had their lessons. The building was already ablaze as frantic parents beat at the flames with wet sacks, or threw buckets of water from the pump into the inferno. Smith could be heard cackling unrepentantly from the far side of the building, which was full of the screams of the trapped students and their teacher.
The fire blazed with a supernatural kind of force, and the pastor thought he heard the sound of the Teacher laughing from within the building when it became apparent that no one could be saved.
The church burnt for several hours, and when it was finally extinguished, there was nothing left. Mourning parents tried to find something of their children to bury, and Smith wisely disappeared from town, his mission against the works of Satan completed.
The teacher’s burnt body was buried deep in the ground and covered with brick tomb. The children’s smaller bodies were interred beneath wooden crosses. Of all the student’s in the school that fall, only the pastor’s small son survived.
To this day, voices can be heard in the graveyard of at Burnt Church, chanting unintelligible words, as the school children and the teacher once chanted in the woods outside town. Sometimes apparitions are seen, and dark walkers who roam the graveyard at night. And they say that a brick taken from the grave of the evil teacher can set fire to objects on which they are placed.
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wow!!!!!!!! cool!!!!!!!!!! ms sandy
Posted by: coley | October 28, 2009 03:24 PM
freaky
Posted by: Anonymous | October 29, 2009 07:58 PM
his would be so cool as a movie. you need to make scarier ones though, like ghost stories to tell around a campfire.
Posted by: Kaie | October 30, 2009 10:02 AM
I'M GUNA HAVE NIGHTMARES FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: BobMan123 | October 30, 2009 10:07 AM
cool
Posted by: me | October 30, 2009 01:22 PM
Hey that was totally........not scary.....BOO!..That was scarier than that story i just read!..BOO! HAHAHAHAHAHA!
Posted by: blah | October 30, 2009 01:47 PM
im going to tell this tonight its halloween
Posted by: courtney | October 31, 2009 09:04 AM
woah. kool story one of the best ones ive heard
Posted by: brandi | October 31, 2009 11:30 AM
That was scary.I dont want to go to school...
Posted by: Anonymous | November 7, 2009 11:15 PM
fun, but not at all scary
Posted by: Becca | December 22, 2009 08:37 AM
COOL
Posted by: anthea | December 28, 2009 03:40 PM
lol thats cool
Posted by: alex | January 4, 2010 04:21 PM
that was freaky. i wonder if my school is evil.
Posted by: saul | January 9, 2010 10:10 PM
lol nonsense
Posted by: Anonymous | January 15, 2010 04:13 PM
tis is supr coool
Posted by: brandon | January 19, 2010 08:37 PM
OMG WHAT A GOOD STORY
Posted by: beth | January 20, 2010 12:56 PM
Wow, this one is pretty good. Really, it all depends on the story, and just because you think it isn't scary doesn't mean it isn't scary. Don't be suprized when there is a bump in the night...
Posted by: Xill | January 21, 2010 03:52 PM
Niiiice Great job ms sandy :)
Posted by: Anonymous | January 23, 2010 02:29 PM
wow that was ok i gess something my little sister would want to read i bet
Posted by: vilotek | January 29, 2010 03:11 PM
woooow i wonder if our teachers do that
Posted by: Anonymous | January 30, 2010 12:59 PM
very scary.....not but i dont want to go to school again!
Posted by: zoe | January 31, 2010 02:33 PM
This story wus kinda cool. i wana take a brick and put it on my skewel or some one i hate *cough* mom *cough*.
Posted by: lorna | February 3, 2010 03:24 PM
Try BLOODY MARY AWESOME STORY
Posted by: MsRockin563 | February 5, 2010 12:34 PM
good one... :-)
Posted by: Anonymous | February 11, 2010 03:32 AM
wowo
Posted by: Anonymous | February 14, 2010 05:04 PM
good story
Posted by: L is my name | February 16, 2010 06:50 PM
WOW... THIS WAS NOT SCARY AT ALL... :(
Posted by: OMG! | February 17, 2010 08:02 PM
spooky
Posted by: Anonymous | February 24, 2010 11:12 PM
Quite good
Posted by: Anonymous | February 25, 2010 05:16 AM
awesome
Posted by: Anonymous | February 25, 2010 05:17 AM
dudes i have to say i is a kool story i guess lol yeah but kool. i have to read it agin.lol smile!!!!ps i love it:)
Posted by: Anonymous | March 3, 2010 01:30 PM
creepy but my school would never be like that
Posted by: Anonymous | March 4, 2010 05:45 PM