Dancing with the Devil
A Texas Ghost Story
retold by
S. E. Schlosser
The girl hurried through her schoolwork as fast as she could. It was the night of the high school dance, along about 70 years ago in the town of Kingsville, Texas. The girl was so excited about the dance. She had bought a brand new, sparkly red dress for the dance. She knew she looked smashing in it. It was going to be the best evening of her life.
Then her mother came in the house, looking pale and determined.
"You are not going to that dance," her mother said.
"But why?" the girl asked her mother.
"I've just been talking to the preacher. He says the dance is going to be for the devil. You are absolutely forbidden to go," her mother said.
The girl nodded as if she accepted her mother's words. But she was determined to go to the dance. As soon as her mother was busy, she put on her brand new red dress and ran down to the K.C. Hall where the dance was being held.
As soon as she walked into the room, all the guys turned to look at her. She was startled by all the attention. Normally, no one noticed her. Her mother sometimes accused her of being too awkward to get a boyfriend. But she was not awkward that night. The boys in her class were fighting with each other to dance with her.
Later, she broke away from the crowd and went to the table to get some punch to drink. She heard a sudden hush. The music stopped. When she turned, she saw a handsome man with jet black hair and clothes standing next to her.
"Dance with me," he said.
She managed to stammer a "yes", completely stunned by this gorgeous man. He led her out on the dance floor. The music sprang up at once. She found herself dancing better than she had ever danced before. They were the center of attention.
Then the man spun her around and around. She gasped for breath, trying to step out of the spin. But he spun her faster and faster. Her feet felt hot. The floor seemed to melt under her. He spun her even faster. She was spinning so fast that a cloud of dust flew up around them both so that they were hidden from the crowd.
When the dust settled, the girl was gone. The man in black bowed once to the crowd and disappeared. The devil had come to his party and he had spun the girl all the way to hell.
You can read more Texas folklore and ghost stories in Spooky Texas by S.E. Schlosser.




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It was ok
Posted by: Anonymous | July 8, 2010 06:23 PM
that is cool but scary but weird at the same time but it is cool!
Posted by: maggie | July 11, 2010 10:34 PM
stupid
Posted by: none | July 13, 2010 01:48 PM
i was creeeeeepy
Posted by: ariana and angi | July 14, 2010 02:55 PM
Not that scary
Posted by: Taylor | July 14, 2010 03:20 PM
I've heard scarier ones
Posted by: Anonymous | July 15, 2010 10:03 AM
Thats not what really happened. the girl ended up with burns where the devil touched her she was rushed to the hospital.
Posted by: noemi | July 15, 2010 09:04 PM
wow
Posted by: Jenna | July 17, 2010 05:34 PM
I THINK IM GETTING USED TO THESE STORIES
Posted by: Lupita | July 17, 2010 11:42 PM
You are all wrong. The story ends when she looks down an the man has the foot of a rooster and the other of a goat.
Posted by: Anonymous | July 19, 2010 10:31 PM
i was the one dancing with her
Posted by: andrew | July 20, 2010 04:45 PM
it was not scary at all
Posted by: zurya salas | July 20, 2010 09:17 PM
that wasnt scary but i enjoyed it
Posted by: Alexis | July 21, 2010 09:34 AM
if you were da one dat danced w/ her den wat r you doing on the internet.? any who it was cool but not scary
Posted by: lola | July 21, 2010 03:09 PM
don't be stupid we all know that god is always the winner and the flipin hell peoples always loses and everyone believes in god forever and ever and u should hear da laugh hahaha!!!
Posted by: jenny | July 21, 2010 05:49 PM
uhm, it was alright i guess.... dont like the ending i like that one that someone else said, she had burns where the devil touched her, but yeah it was oakaay
Posted by: Anonymous | July 21, 2010 08:27 PM
Um I belive he asks do u know who u are dancing with
Posted by: Anonymous | July 22, 2010 01:49 AM
omg that was not even SCARY!!!!!! like wat the f××××
Posted by: jessica | July 22, 2010 02:17 AM
that was so cool
Posted by: andrea | July 22, 2010 11:07 AM
this story was not has as scary has i tought it would me but it was interesting.
Posted by: giggles :P | July 22, 2010 02:21 PM
It was fine. I guess. It would have been better though if there was more of a plot.
Posted by: Kim | July 23, 2010 02:13 AM
thats not exactly how it ended but it was best they didnt include the real ending its so horrifying and they cut out some of the story.
but I'll give you a glimsp of the real ending.
when she was dancing with the devil(handsome guy) she looked at his feet and one was a leg of a goat and the other of a rooster.
thats when she then screamed and the devil pulled away from her;and when he disappeared a stench of sulfur was left behind,and the people at the halloween dance stormed for the door. Some of the brave people went outside and called the police .... the girl ends up in hospital with 2nd degree burns, where the devil placed his hands on her. When he was dancing with her and also when she went to the bathroom there in the hospital and looked in the mirror she saw his face (the devil) and later they called the priest. to come and pray for her and story goes on that later she died im not sure if it was at the hospital or at her house.
Posted by: Anonymous | July 23, 2010 05:20 AM
so boring
Posted by: SHAMINI | July 24, 2010 01:29 AM
i did'nt get it. but i guess it would make sense to send her to hell that way, but why would the devil just take one victum? ! ?
Posted by: scary stories, scary flims addict 92 | July 24, 2010 08:24 PM
thats was so not scary.
Posted by: anonymous | July 25, 2010 01:20 PM
Something like this actily happend to my freind.she went to the dance and danced with a lot of guys.wen she returned she had burns in her hands and waist.my grandma says that she dance with the devil.
Posted by: hi | July 26, 2010 12:59 PM
SO NOT SCARY I LIKED THE ENDING THAT THE LAST PERSON WROTE
Posted by: Bobby | July 27, 2010 02:25 AM
that was'nt scary but i kinda liked it but it was not the real ending
Posted by: jennifer | July 27, 2010 04:38 AM
its was cool
Posted by: nanalawson | July 27, 2010 10:19 AM
cool
Posted by: hdfb | July 27, 2010 10:20 AM
it was ok but it was not all that but i like the one when the girl burned where the devil tuched her and that was lame
Posted by: lolmas | July 27, 2010 06:24 PM
that was cool
Posted by: kerriyana | July 27, 2010 08:53 PM
it was a good story but it cold have been scarier!!!!!
Posted by: tj | July 29, 2010 11:22 AM
kind of ah interesting but have to say that it aint scary at all!
Posted by: ofentse | August 1, 2010 10:58 AM
i'm really good at telling ghost stories! i'm gonna tell this to my scardy cat friend! she has a jet-black haired boyfriend and the dance is comming up! talk about a perfect opportunity to scare her!!!! XDXDXDXD
Posted by: sawthis | August 2, 2010 04:35 PM
it was cool
Posted by: pv | August 2, 2010 06:18 PM
ok for the people who said tht was not all scary u must be joking tht scared te f**** out of me! i mean really ur dancing with the most evil thing in the universe!?!?!?!?! (but then again i get scared easily lol)
Posted by: Anonymous | August 2, 2010 09:15 PM
not scary its creepy
Posted by: jeo | August 3, 2010 05:20 AM
That is what she gets for not listening to her mother!!! lol
Posted by: Justine | August 3, 2010 05:26 AM
thats not scary
Posted by: Anonymous | August 3, 2010 05:42 PM
it is scary the last part was super scary
Posted by: justyn | August 3, 2010 10:06 PM
AS IF....
Posted by: Anonymous | August 4, 2010 08:41 PM
it was not that scary but the ending was bad for the girl so i think it was ok but the ending was the best bit
Posted by: jamie | August 8, 2010 09:10 PM
it was ok. ive heard much more horrifying stuff.
Posted by: a | August 9, 2010 02:29 PM
we all know god is always watching and protecting us
Posted by: Anonymous | August 10, 2010 01:06 PM
omg AHHAHHAAH
Posted by: Anonymous | August 10, 2010 04:43 PM
it was nice..........
i love the concept of the story......... the girl should have listened......
Posted by: seira | August 10, 2010 07:52 PM
ohh im so scared. im 10 and im not scared a bit.i spun her to heaven. lol
not scary
i luved it
Posted by: Ashely | August 10, 2010 09:04 PM
it wuz cool!
Posted by: diana | August 11, 2010 03:45 PM
umm good story,can this story have a picture because if this story have it own picture it will be more scary.
Posted by: Arie | August 11, 2010 11:52 PM
My mom told me the same story when I was 5 years old.
Posted by: Johnny-16 | August 12, 2010 08:53 AM
I didn't think it was scary
Posted by: sophie | August 13, 2010 08:06 AM
HAA'
That was wackk'!
An why are all of u ppl fighting
Ha' fo no reason !
>:D
Posted by: »Roberto« HAA' ;D | August 13, 2010 04:00 PM
it is true.
not scary story....
Posted by: tolits | August 14, 2010 10:31 AM
oh i get it she didnt listen to her mom and went to the dance and the devil say that and he took her to hell well that was not that scary it was ok bye
Posted by: Gianna | August 18, 2010 12:25 PM
Loviinqq thiss story
Posted by: SkreamTheaa | August 18, 2010 10:20 PM
it was nice and little bit scary.
Posted by: ajay | August 23, 2010 05:05 AM
it an awesome story and i believe in it i wonder if it'll happen to me or one of my friends oooo im scared now
Posted by: dynamite | August 26, 2010 12:14 PM
this is not even scary
lol
Posted by: mary | August 26, 2010 04:14 PM
oh i get it.. the devil spun her to hell for not listening to her mother and going to the dance!
Posted by: Katie | August 28, 2010 12:59 PM
not cool
Posted by: Anonymous | August 29, 2010 11:26 AM
that was awesome :p
Posted by: Lainey | August 31, 2010 03:23 PM
not really that scary. . . intresting though..
Posted by: Lady J | September 1, 2010 09:29 AM
its strange!
Posted by: matthew | September 1, 2010 09:59 AM
it was ok does any1 now the scaries story ever some one please tell me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: milio | September 1, 2010 06:27 PM
believe in god and in heaven but not in satan and hell!!!!!! gosh...
Posted by: kristinejoyce b. avila | September 2, 2010 01:04 AM
I dont belive in satanic things but kool story, not the real ending...
Posted by: South park fan girl 13 | September 2, 2010 07:24 PM
honestly, its very interesting at first but I wasn't able to appreciate the ending.....
Posted by: Christine | September 3, 2010 12:21 AM
lol I heard this story before too many versions of it.
Posted by: edward | September 3, 2010 04:52 AM
that was really wierd! !!!
Posted by: nuno | September 5, 2010 11:47 AM
Well I love reading scary stories but this one wasn't really scary. It was very interesting and I liked it though. :-)
Posted by: Tamica | September 5, 2010 05:13 PM
Not To Scary But Still Good :)
Posted by: Anonymous | September 6, 2010 03:57 PM
loved it i love creeping myself out lol
Posted by: sarah | September 7, 2010 01:28 AM
remind me never to go to a dance again -___-'
Posted by: Onyx | September 7, 2010 08:26 PM
I think that this story was interesting
Posted by: Tom Kelley | September 9, 2010 04:27 PM
it was ok but not very scary
Posted by: hahahahahaha not tellin my name | September 10, 2010 08:40 AM
WOOAAHH THAT WAS KREEPY!!
Posted by: Anonymous | September 10, 2010 10:03 AM
i love it was cool
Posted by: Anonymous | September 11, 2010 04:52 AM
i think it was creepy
Posted by: Anonymous | September 11, 2010 12:19 PM
yeeaaa that wasnt scary...but i like the whole concept and it was still cool
Posted by: tkeyah | September 11, 2010 03:02 PM
so lame and not scary at all!!!!
Posted by: austin | September 11, 2010 05:00 PM
good. could be better
Posted by: bidisha panja | September 11, 2010 11:36 PM
like wat Kim said,check out the real story at Castle of Spirits
Posted by: punkprincess | September 12, 2010 01:51 PM
that was good but to short it needs more!
Posted by: amy | September 12, 2010 05:28 PM
that was so cool i liked it but it was to short and not even scarry
Posted by: autumn | September 16, 2010 02:34 PM
it's not supposed to be scary its supposed to be good and i loved it
Posted by: madeline | September 16, 2010 07:24 PM
never sneaking out again!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | September 17, 2010 06:04 PM
i'm 10 and that story didnt even sound ture
Posted by: Anonymous | September 18, 2010 06:54 PM
not to scary.
Posted by: dina | September 22, 2010 01:54 AM
not too scary.
Posted by: dina | September 22, 2010 01:55 AM
I feel ni love for it
Posted by: MR.E | September 22, 2010 08:58 AM
it was not that bad
Posted by: ashley | September 23, 2010 09:53 AM
wow ive heard this exact same story my aunt told it 2 me i didnt think it was scary but my cousinn was scared out of her mind...
Posted by: nathy | September 24, 2010 07:54 PM
you were the one dancing with her I don't believe that
Posted by: Elisa | September 25, 2010 04:57 PM
As a small child, they told this story to my friends and me. It's good.
Posted by: JoKeRsMiLeS | September 30, 2010 02:47 AM
This is my favorate yet bbz xxxxx
Posted by: Anonymous | October 1, 2010 01:20 PM
love it
Posted by: Anonymous | October 1, 2010 01:21 PM
it's great i loved it for my project
Posted by: anonymous | October 1, 2010 03:41 PM
wasnt scary but a good story
Posted by: Haley | October 1, 2010 04:34 PM
its kinda scary just the fact that it was the devil dancinq the rest is kinda wierd not really scaryy' like OMqeee butt ahh...
Posted by: MiMi | October 2, 2010 12:34 PM
Cool...I guess.
Posted by: Casey | October 3, 2010 09:13 AM
Good story! Another reminder to OBEY YOUR PARENTS!
Posted by: lorelie | October 4, 2010 07:13 PM
she should have listened to her mom D:
Posted by: natalie | October 6, 2010 04:21 AM
yea the story ends with her looking down to see a couple of features of the beast....like rooster feet
Posted by: Anonymous | October 8, 2010 02:15 PM
tht was so not scary but i liked it n it was kewl
Posted by: joanna | October 9, 2010 09:54 AM
this story was a good story but she should have listened to her mother and not have went to that dance.
Posted by: Ariel and Jean | October 9, 2010 07:53 PM
its cool not scary i wanted to read or see a scary one
Posted by: monkey47 | October 10, 2010 05:53 PM
AWESOME I LOVE THIS STORY
Posted by: desia | October 11, 2010 10:11 AM
i heard one close to the same but at the end the guy had goat feet and a tail was not red but had had horns
Posted by: Anonymous | October 11, 2010 05:54 PM
awesome the last part was great
Posted by: aarogya | October 13, 2010 11:20 PM
lol that was short i liked the last sentence the best =3
Posted by: Michelle | October 14, 2010 05:21 PM
that is really spooky. I think its good
Posted by: justin | October 14, 2010 06:06 PM
it has to be told inorder to be scary....and some elements must be added. but good base for a story line....im going to tell it to my voice class for our halloween assignment. Cool thing is I have black combed back jet black hair....haaahhaaahahaaaaaaa!
Posted by: Hunter Saab | October 15, 2010 09:14 AM
Ive never herd that story before, but I like that some told the real story, thats better
Posted by: Anonymous | October 15, 2010 01:10 PM
good
Posted by: justin | October 15, 2010 02:34 PM
Well, this was very wierd and I believe in God which is the most powerful person in the universe but, this was a good and wierd story. As a ghost hunter i cnt really connect or explain anything else
Posted by: Anthony Angel | October 16, 2010 03:19 PM
What was the real ending? Because i know that wasn't the real ending and did that really happen???? It was cool but not scary
Posted by: injia | October 17, 2010 04:23 AM
Here I stand, helpless and left for dead.
Close your eyes, so many days go by.
Easy to find what's wrong, harder to find what's right.
I believe in you, I can show you that I can see right through all your empty lies.
I won't stay long, in this world so wrong.
[Chorus:]
Say goodbye, as we dance with the devil tonight.
Don't you dare look at him in the eye, as we dance with the devil tonight?
Trembling, crawling across my skin.
Feeling your cold dead eyes, stealing the life of mine.
I believe in you, I can show you that I can see right through all your empty lies.
I won't last long, in this world so wrong.
[Chorus]
Hold on. Hold on.
[Chorus]
Hold on. Hold on.
Goodbye.
Breaking Benjamin Dance With The Devil Phobia
Posted by: Cade | October 18, 2010 01:16 AM
ITS GOOD...:).!<3.!
Posted by: Chardonnay | October 18, 2010 02:58 PM
actually a really well authored and witty tale
Posted by: Matt | October 18, 2010 10:28 PM
i was BORN in texas
Posted by: Anonymous | October 19, 2010 12:26 PM
it is ok.
Posted by: Anonymous | October 19, 2010 02:08 PM
LOVE ITTTT<3
Posted by: tifferz | October 19, 2010 07:04 PM
i wouldn't consider this a scary story at all!
Posted by: kat | October 20, 2010 10:20 AM
Wow. Not the scariest story, but still pretty good.
Posted by: Shiko | October 20, 2010 08:15 PM
THAT IS NOT TRUE GOD ALWAYS WILL WIN.BUT THE REST WAS COOL.
Posted by: YOU CAN NOT KNOW | October 20, 2010 09:23 PM
it's good
Posted by: brittany | October 21, 2010 10:55 AM
that was cool
Posted by: johanna santas | October 21, 2010 02:27 PM
sweet
Posted by: thundar | October 22, 2010 09:06 AM
that wuz cool
Posted by: romaro settles | October 22, 2010 09:44 AM
that was scarrrrrry
Posted by: arielstarr09 | October 22, 2010 09:45 AM
wow thats wierd
Posted by: Chris | October 22, 2010 02:14 PM
heyyy i love this thing its funny
Posted by: jazmine | October 23, 2010 04:14 PM
weird
Posted by: Anonymous | October 24, 2010 01:30 AM
wow thats creepy Just listen to your parents and dont dance with a boy unless you know them!
Posted by: Danielle | October 24, 2010 05:28 PM
weird!!!
Posted by: hannah | October 24, 2010 05:58 PM
itwasdumb
Posted by: DESTINY | October 25, 2010 03:21 PM
it is one of the most funniest story i have read
Posted by: suzzane | October 26, 2010 09:11 AM
kool
Posted by: Anonymous | October 26, 2010 11:23 AM
good storie
Posted by: Владимир | October 26, 2010 11:45 AM
kool
Posted by: ed | October 26, 2010 04:38 PM
this is so true which you are so can dancing with the devil, becasue i remember when i went to the grand night at Disneyland i dance with 4 boys for the whole night in the dark side with the others. After that night, it was the morning and i couldn't awake 'cause i was so tired, so i went home and took 3hrs nap. After my 3hrs nap, i went to shower and i saw two bick marks on my left arm, but i couldn't remember thogh where did i get this from. It took me for 3months to wait for them to be gone. So whoever was writing this story, i believe that u reminde me about this so thank u n whoever said it's not true f... u then because it is true i'm sorry but it fricks me out, its true!
Posted by: Zeina | October 27, 2010 01:08 AM
Yes, This Legend I regret to say is not a legend. It Happened on 3 known accounts here in the San Antonio Area, On the West Side, Old Hwy.90 to be exact. The Final account to my recollection was at a neighborhood Bar/Club/DanceHall whatever you want to call it known as " El Cameroncito" which moved twice not far from it's original Haunt. I am a Local Dj and I will Tell you, the location itself was very dark, gloomy & Creepy. Since I was in elementary school growing up here in the area I never saw anyone renting that Venue out for anything whatsoever. It's a Gentleman's club now (Ironic, huh?) "The Devils Playground". If You ever Come Around to San Antonio, Just ask any person on the far west side about the Legend of " El Cameroncito" and most will tell you the exact same story.
Posted by: Unknown | October 27, 2010 11:57 AM
weirdd..not scarry at alll mannn. get over it. il believe it when i see itttt, but i haven't seen it so ii donnntt belieevveee this!!! :):) thankyou,
the devil
Posted by: weirdo | October 27, 2010 12:06 PM
omg bestest story like everrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Posted by: Nick | October 28, 2010 07:45 AM
ok then
Posted by: Anonymous | October 28, 2010 08:52 AM
Anticlimactic...: "The devil had come to his party and he had spun the girl all the way to hell." Lame
Posted by: Ashley | October 28, 2010 11:25 AM
meh...... it was very predictable
Posted by: anna | October 28, 2010 05:26 PM
honestly devil stories don't creep me out ,it was ok but yes there are scarier ones !!!
Posted by: kas | October 28, 2010 08:25 PM
i have to right a poem about this story aka im at school right now
Posted by: colton hitzelberger | October 29, 2010 11:13 AM
i heard this story when i was in middle school and it could be true, i live like and hr and half from kingsville and alot of people know this story, pretty trippy finding it here on this site
Posted by: n0way07 | October 29, 2010 01:05 PM
i have heard this story to but it had a different ending, the girl danced with the devil and as they were dancing she felt a burning sensation and let go of the guy and looked at her hands to see they were burnt and when she looked at the guy he was gone and everyone around her wonder how her hands were burned
Posted by: Monkeyman | October 29, 2010 01:09 PM
it was alright
Posted by: dre | October 29, 2010 03:27 PM
I found it more funny than scary,I mean did she like melt a giant hole in the ground or something?Thats really funny.
Posted by: Anonymous | October 29, 2010 08:44 PM
it wasn't scary at all,it was really weird n kinda dumb...
Posted by: anonymous | October 30, 2010 07:45 AM
ooo so scaryyy! im gonna have terrifying nightmares tonite about pink bunnies and flowers and marshmellows cuz of this story >.>
Posted by: Holly | October 30, 2010 03:21 PM
it was really great i am going to print that off and i would read it again and again
Posted by: freddy bed bed wooohj | October 31, 2010 07:47 AM
it was the most boringest story i've everrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr READ!
Posted by: winner 1000000 | October 31, 2010 10:55 AM
i live in san antonio tx,, the girl(old woman) in that story is still alive and lives in a creepy church in the woods with her caretaker. she has never been right after that night.the church is just down the road.. spooky.
Posted by: mike h. | November 1, 2010 05:03 PM
this was a story with no suspension and if your looking 4 a good story then try black magic
Posted by: scarlette | November 1, 2010 05:23 PM
Actually she was supposed to be the most beautiful girl of all. She was conceited. And the mom told her if she didn't stop being conceited that something bad would happen. Her mom begged her not to go to the dance, but she went anyway. Then so on and so on with the ending of the sulfuric acid and she was left there on the floor with burn marks and burn marks of a goat and rooster on the floor walking towards the exit. I was told she died there. And supposedly there was two other dances on the same night in Mexico and somewhere else. And three girls died that night at the same time the exact same way the first girl died
Posted by: Anonymous | November 2, 2010 08:02 PM
it was alright
Posted by: bob | November 4, 2010 08:25 AM
i like the ending next time listen to mom.
Posted by: Anonymous | November 4, 2010 10:13 AM
THAT WAS FREAKILY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: TDD lover | November 4, 2010 12:28 PM
it was ok but could have been better!!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | November 4, 2010 01:53 PM
this story is the best story that i have ever heard buy the way the girl should of knew much manners not to go to the party
Posted by: gabrel | November 5, 2010 04:50 PM
kind of scary!?
Posted by: tia | November 6, 2010 04:20 AM
I go to school here in kingsville how creepy that i came across this story
Posted by: s.<3.r | November 7, 2010 10:33 PM
the dance place in my town is called K.C. hall
Posted by: Anonymous | November 8, 2010 10:46 AM
Awesome Story. Using it for project. thnx.
Posted by: Howard Y. | November 9, 2010 06:43 AM
I know somone that actually experienced that very thing.
Posted by: Paul c. | November 9, 2010 05:34 PM
that wasn't too scary but i enjoyed it too
Posted by: Anonymous | November 12, 2010 09:04 AM
Great
Posted by: Adam tweedle | November 16, 2010 01:59 PM
it was good
Posted by: Anonymous | November 18, 2010 12:56 AM
My grandmother told me a story that is similar to the this one only nobody in her story got dragged to hell.
Posted by: Anonymous | November 18, 2010 02:31 PM
That's what she gets for wearing red in front of the devil!
Posted by: Renee | November 20, 2010 12:38 PM
ammmm,it was cool and spooky too.quite weird also.but on the whole it was very nice.i really like these type of horror stories.awesome
Posted by: rukhma | November 22, 2010 11:26 AM
it wasn't even scary it was funny. it sounds cool
Posted by: Anonymous | November 23, 2010 04:40 PM
TTHATS NOT RIGHT !!!!
Posted by: KIM | November 24, 2010 06:17 PM
not scary but a ok story
Posted by: Anonymous | December 3, 2010 01:21 AM
this is hilarious!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | December 3, 2010 03:07 PM
spooky!!^0^
Posted by: Anonymous | December 3, 2010 06:34 PM
God that was creepy, I'm deffinetly going to have nightmares.
Posted by: Anonymous | December 4, 2010 05:22 PM
okay, but i think there is more to it.
Posted by: alicia | December 7, 2010 04:05 PM
it's scary gosh
Posted by: sara | December 11, 2010 04:06 PM
I'm from kingsville, tx and I've never heard of that story but I'll ask my dad about real soon!
Posted by: Monica KINGSVILLE, TX | December 12, 2010 08:58 PM
I like this storyyy its soooooo cool!!!!!! :D <3
Posted by: Anonymous | December 15, 2010 03:08 PM
it was ok and good!!!
Posted by: amber | December 16, 2010 12:24 PM
now i don't want to go to my prom!!!!
Posted by: rachel | December 24, 2010 05:19 PM
It was alright, but look on the bright side... It reminds me of a song. :3 "Dance with the Devil" by Breaking Benjamin. xD
Posted by: Un-named | December 28, 2010 03:15 PM
i like that one!!! :D
Posted by: natalia | January 2, 2011 12:20 AM
these story scared the heck out of me (jk) itss was good but lame u peeps should add more interesting facts or spooky endings :)
Posted by: Anonymous | January 13, 2011 07:52 PM
I'll never sleep again and I am never going to a dance
Posted by: Anonymous | January 14, 2011 07:35 AM
that wasent scary and yeah i like the ending on the other comment
Posted by: anna | January 16, 2011 03:33 PM
wow how lame i like the mexican one beter the moment in which they were dancing the girl felt as if she where floting on air she danced egalantly withe the handsome man as the song progresed see heard gasps of shock coming from the students then she realised why she felt so light she was dancing in mid-air she started panicing she stared into th handsome mans face which glared back an evil smile and let her go crashing onto the floor meters below ending her life as the devil desapered.
Posted by: priscilla | January 17, 2011 01:26 AM
When I heard this story I heard dat he took her to hell and kept her as his wife forever
Posted by: Anonymous | January 17, 2011 07:36 PM
the story wasnt scary but it was interesting.
Posted by: Anonymous | January 17, 2011 08:05 PM
cool
Posted by: jazmine | January 17, 2011 09:55 PM
i think people have there own perspectives about how the world works. mabye some people belive in there own god or mabye some people belive in the devil.
it's people's fact and own opions what people belive in..
Posted by: keri robinson | January 20, 2011 02:50 PM
hey relax all every one has own opions with this story! go with the flow
Posted by: keri robinson | January 20, 2011 02:52 PM
this story was not scary but it was intertaining whats wrong to the people who didnt like this story.u guys r lame :(
Posted by: fredy | January 22, 2011 11:26 PM
some of the girls on here think that these stories are not scary and are boring and dumb but they say that because there scared.......
Posted by: Anonymous | January 24, 2011 06:31 PM
its too freakinqq short it was ok
Posted by: Anonymous | January 29, 2011 12:46 PM
I think the ending should be she drinks the punch, the devil is next to her she goes to hell and it turn out someone had spiked the punch with rat poison
Posted by: Josh | January 30, 2011 01:04 PM
great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: allison | January 30, 2011 05:00 PM
oh my gosh that is creepyy :/
Posted by: lauren | February 3, 2011 04:04 PM
Awsome and creepy
Posted by: Anonymous | February 4, 2011 02:43 PM
MAGIC or DEVIL
Posted by: Kenzie | February 11, 2011 06:53 PM
this is scary and wierd
Posted by: susie | February 12, 2011 04:27 PM
I find it good but not scary at all.
Posted by: Runa | February 18, 2011 12:07 PM
I think the very ending was good. Just GOOD.I like the part when she dissapears :3
Posted by: Bee-bee | February 19, 2011 11:52 PM
i love scary stories
Posted by: ladygaga | February 21, 2011 03:40 PM
i love it. almost felt like iwas there. did you create it
Posted by: tough bananas 13 | February 22, 2011 08:46 PM
oh my god..
Posted by: Anonymous | March 2, 2011 04:04 AM
it was ok ? kind of not REAL at all !
Posted by: Anonymous | March 2, 2011 04:10 PM
awesome ,she got abducted because the red dress!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: edfuitgutjryiktrgjyt | March 11, 2011 10:57 AM
scary and wierd at the same time
Posted by: Anonymous | March 11, 2011 02:55 PM
That was so scary and it was creepy hope it wont happen to me
Posted by: Chiquis | March 12, 2011 03:02 PM
being religious and believing in thedevil, i thought it was scary.
Posted by: Anonymous | March 14, 2011 05:26 AM
sounds like something a drunk man listening to country music all night would tell. it would be good for me to forget that one.
Posted by: allen moon | March 16, 2011 10:48 PM
The true story was said earlier on these comments i heard this story when i was little and i remember that she was wearing this beautiful red dress like it says and that all eyes where on her and that the most handsome guy on the dancefloor had asked her to dance as they danced and danced away she felt burning hot around her arms as she stopped and looked at her hands and saw they had thay guys hands marked on her as she panicked she looked down and saw a foot of a goat and one of a rooster...not shure if she died,not shure if the guy(devil) took her,or if she went to the hospital all i know is from what my family members have told me is that it's true hope someone can find out what happened to her after that...good luck
Posted by: lucy | March 17, 2011 03:05 AM
I was Creeped out!
Posted by: Clara | March 17, 2011 08:12 PM
this story is so cool, i think the deserved at the same time because, she never listened to her mum if my mum told me my school dance was meant to be for a devil i wouldn't went noway not in a million years.
Posted by: clair | March 18, 2011 04:34 AM
haha lol that was stupid creepy :D
Posted by: goth chic | March 20, 2011 12:41 PM
This was scary.Especially the ending.
Posted by: alyssa | March 20, 2011 03:31 PM
ooohhh so scary
Posted by: Anonymous | March 23, 2011 06:41 PM
i think this was creepy and very scary but it was kind of fun
Posted by: march 26 2011 | March 26, 2011 07:06 PM
That's based off of an older story where she had to babysit her little brother but she took him with her and the man was older but yea same attention but the little brother notices his feet while the pair dance and sees the man has crow like feet and says "sister , look at his feet!" and then the devil scars her face badly and now she's ugly ;0 nice story thou
Posted by: Wolf | April 6, 2011 03:13 PM
i dont remember who told me this but the devil usally scratches people once he's done visiting them or takes something or someone specail away from you
Posted by: gabby | April 11, 2011 07:34 PM
okay, my mother lived in wisconsin or so working in a beautyshop the night this happened. my mother hates me going to parties after this.....plus my mother knew the mother of the girl. its crazy..
Posted by: jada | April 13, 2011 12:45 PM
it was kinda scary its not something i would want to happen to me.
Posted by: Andrew Blackburn | April 13, 2011 03:52 PM
The story was pritty cool but definitly not scary.
Posted by: Anonymous | April 19, 2011 04:30 PM
i like last part of story
Posted by: varshu | May 19, 2011 03:54 AM
I heard it was that she saw the man's feet and they were goat hooves
Posted by: Kamrynn | June 3, 2011 11:30 AM
Wow that is cool
Posted by: Kyra | June 9, 2011 03:29 PM
wow
Posted by: maria | June 18, 2011 05:19 PM
this would be a good love story, but it's not scary. Like what if she fell in love with him and he acidently ends up killing her. hehehe..."acidently..."
Posted by: Anonymous | June 23, 2011 11:30 AM
that story was a little scary but i just feel bad for the mom
Posted by: Anonymous | July 1, 2011 02:28 PM
Interestin. Lol.
Posted by: Hiba | July 2, 2011 08:59 PM
This was one of my favorites,but it was alittle creepy
Posted by: Kirsten | July 3, 2011 02:00 PM
that was not scary but it was a true story but it is scary
Posted by: diana | July 3, 2011 05:33 PM
It was more like Cinderella not scary!
Posted by: H. | July 4, 2011 11:52 AM
on no im really scared i dont want to to a prom
Posted by: Anonymous | July 6, 2011 11:39 PM
I know this myth my parents told me this already but it is kinda creepy
Posted by: Maria | July 8, 2011 08:34 PM
thiz story wsnt scary but it kept me thinkn
Posted by: frootloop | July 13, 2011 03:47 PM
That is a really old story. A different version. The comments from others told it a little more accurately ... somewhat.
Posted by: Anonymous | July 14, 2011 12:20 AM
dang that was so awesome
Posted by: Anonymous | July 20, 2011 04:45 PM
ok, first of all, the version i was told was that when she looked down,she saw he had a rooster foot and a goat hoove.then there was a black out and every thing was quiet except for a blood curdling shriek.when the lights came back on, the girl's dead body was on the floor naked,with the devil's feet burned into her back and he had disapeared....and second, their version was ridiculous, if not funny. i mean, COME ON! he spun her all the way to hell??and also, the mom said,"I've just been talking to the preacher. He says the dance is going to be for the devil!" when i read that, i was confused... why were a bunch of highschool students about to dance for the devil? was it a halloween dance?because if it wasnt, then where are all the other parents? did their kids escape too?if so, dont you think at least one of the parents would have caught them and canceled the dance?
Posted by: oreo | July 28, 2011 04:51 PM
silly.
Posted by: sofi | August 1, 2011 12:37 AM
Why'd he spin her to hell????
Posted by: Phiona | August 3, 2011 10:03 AM
This isnt the scariest story I have heard but could you only imagine back in the days of the old west men and women sit around a bonfire on a hot Texas night and tell this story, back them Im prett sure it would scare the daylights out of them.
Posted by: Dave | August 3, 2011 09:19 PM
Creppy I LOVE IT :D
Posted by: Anonymous | August 4, 2011 08:54 PM
she should of listened to her mother that's Wat she gets Omg by the way awsum story :)
Posted by: alex | August 8, 2011 03:23 PM
listen to your mom next time
Posted by: isabella | August 10, 2011 12:53 PM
Cool. Very interesting story.
Posted by: Anonymous | October 27, 2011 07:58 PM
sooooo cool and i don't scary.LOL :P:P:P:P:P:P:P:P:
Posted by: sopul | October 31, 2011 06:37 AM
it was not that cool because the girl dident go to the hospital
Posted by: dani | October 31, 2011 10:09 AM
it was cool!!!!!!!!!!:)
Posted by: molly | October 31, 2011 10:46 AM
Omfg can that happen?
Posted by: Nonny :3 | October 1, 2012 08:01 PM